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Re: Eyelash
Hello, Sheyren! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! Okay, first off. This made me laugh harder than it should of. How the words are separated and entered the way it is ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: My son. Part 1
Hello, AsherIsAnon! Gxldencrxwns here to leave you a review and a welcome to YWS! You asked me for a review for this piece, so that's what I'm gonna do! My ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: goodbye
Hello, Authorian! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. From the length of the poem, I can tell I won't have much to review on, but every word counts right? I believe ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: side effects may include mood swings
Hello,TheStormAroundMe! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! The first thing I noticed was the size of the words. It was hard for me to read this, mainly because of my bad ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: Alone (Part 1)
Hello, Adolia1998! Gxldencrxwns here to leave you a review and a warm welcome to YWS! The first thing I noticed about this writing is the way you wrote okay. When ...
Jul 13, 2017 -
Re: untitled document
Hello, honeymoon! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. Right off the bat, I noticed one thing: the way this poem was formatted. There's nothing wrong with it, I personally like this ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Dark Room
Hello, Ace101! Gxldencrxwns here to leave a review on your poem! I'll review this line by line, with a ^ next to my words. “Hello? Is anyone their?” Your in ...
Jul 12, 2017 -
Re: Coping with Fear and the Girl in my Mirror (TRIGGER WARNING: Depression and self harm)
Hello, JustALittleBarry! Gxldencrxwns here to give you a review on your lovely poem. I'll review it stanza by stanza, with a ^ next to my words. I continue to struggle ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Now and Forever
Hello, Ronnimusette, and welcome to YWS! I'm here to review your lovely poem. I have one compliment and one complaint, allow me to state them both. Compliment: I've seen a ...
Jul 11, 2017 -
Re: Roadtrip
Hello, thought I'd stop by for a review. To start things off, the very first line of the beginning stanza sounds sort of...off. You're describing the car as a car, ...
Jul 10, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Hello, again, I'm here to review another one of your collaborative poems. The first thing I noticed about this poem is the length. But as in the words of Squidward ...
Jul 9, 2017 -
Re: Deleted
Hello everyone involved in this! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. Overall, this piece was nice. The idea of multiple people coming together to write one poem intrigues me, I might ...
Jul 9, 2017 -
Re: i tell you i'm not afraid but
Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. This poem was beautiful. It talks about topics that are pretty fragile, which were written and handled well. My older brother used to ...
Jul 8, 2017 -
Re: Dread
Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. I think this is the first poem I've read that has cussing in it, so that's a first. You can feel the anger ...
Jul 7, 2017 -
Re: Freedom has reached its peak.
Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. The meaning behind this poem was very raw and honest, and you hit it spot on. You got all the problems we face ...
Jul 7, 2017
