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"A turtle can be a fish if he wants to be. Don't spoil his dreams." ~Brendon Urie

  • Poetry » Health, Dramatic Re: Eyelash

    Hello, Sheyren! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! Okay, first off. This made me laugh harder than it should of. How the words are separated and entered the way it is ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, Horror Re: My son. Part 1

    Hello, AsherIsAnon! Gxldencrxwns here to leave you a review and a welcome to YWS! You asked me for a review for this piece, so that's what I'm gonna do! My ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: goodbye

    Hello, Authorian! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. From the length of the poem, I can tell I won't have much to review on, but every word counts right? I believe ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: side effects may include mood swings

    Hello,TheStormAroundMe! Gxldencrxwns here for a review! The first thing I noticed was the size of the words. It was hard for me to read this, mainly because of my bad ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: Alone (Part 1)

    Hello, Adolia1998! Gxldencrxwns here to leave you a review and a warm welcome to YWS! The first thing I noticed about this writing is the way you wrote okay. When ...

    Jul 13, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: untitled document

    Hello, honeymoon! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. Right off the bat, I noticed one thing: the way this poem was formatted. There's nothing wrong with it, I personally like this ...

    Jul 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Dark Room

    Hello, Ace101! Gxldencrxwns here to leave a review on your poem! I'll review this line by line, with a ^ next to my words. “Hello? Is anyone their?” Your in ...

    Jul 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Coping with Fear and the Girl in my Mirror (TRIGGER WARNING: Depression and self harm)

    Hello, JustALittleBarry! Gxldencrxwns here to give you a review on your lovely poem. I'll review it stanza by stanza, with a ^ next to my words. I continue to struggle ...

    Jul 11, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Now and Forever

    Hello, Ronnimusette, and welcome to YWS! I'm here to review your lovely poem. I have one compliment and one complaint, allow me to state them both. Compliment: I've seen a ...

    Jul 11, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Roadtrip

    Hello, thought I'd stop by for a review. To start things off, the very first line of the beginning stanza sounds sort of...off. You're describing the car as a car, ...

    Jul 10, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Deleted

    Hello, again, I'm here to review another one of your collaborative poems. The first thing I noticed about this poem is the length. But as in the words of Squidward ...

    Jul 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Deleted

    Hello everyone involved in this! Gxldencrxwns here for a review. Overall, this piece was nice. The idea of multiple people coming together to write one poem intrigues me, I might ...

    Jul 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: i tell you i'm not afraid but

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. This poem was beautiful. It talks about topics that are pretty fragile, which were written and handled well. My older brother used to ...

    Jul 8, 2017
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: Dread

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. I think this is the first poem I've read that has cussing in it, so that's a first. You can feel the anger ...

    Jul 7, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Freedom has reached its peak.

    Hello, hello, gxldencrxwns here for a review. The meaning behind this poem was very raw and honest, and you hit it spot on. You got all the problems we face ...

    Jul 7, 2017


The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians