First of all, this is my first review, so sorry if it is bad
"There's a hush of the crowd."
~For me this was a little awkward, and sort of disturbed the flow of the rest of the poem.
"Steady your heart now,
Now it's your part."
~This also felt a little awkward, but that could just be my preference and not actually your fault at all, but I would just read it through a couple of times to review the flow.
Other than those few small bumps in the flow of the poem, I thought it was very good and engaging, which is unusual because I don't normally enjoy poetry. Overall, keep writing, I think you'll go far
Points: 1129
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