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gruzinkerbell

In their hearts humans plan their course, but the LORD establishes their steps.

  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Angels, Human Beings and Orangutangs

    This is a really beautiful poem. I love all of the analogies you use, and as a past advocate for endangered rainforest species, I like the addition of the orangutan. ...

    Mar 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Health, Realistic Re: Uncomfortable

    This is the most honest piece of poetry I've ever read. Hi! It's Serrurie, here to review. Let's get into it: The world is full of everyday things that with ...

    Nov 28, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Warehouse

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's go: The Good Stuff: Let me just say that I am not a horror fan. It's either way too cliche or ...

    Oct 15, 2023
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Young Again in Autumn (Best Friend)

    Hello, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! (But a very quick one, because I couldn't find a single thing to criticize!) The Good Stuff/Personal Thoughts: I love how you ...

    Oct 15, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Frozen Lake

    Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's go: The Good Stuff: This, I believe, has very beautiful themes that I can find residing within many people. No matter ...

    Oct 15, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Romantic Re: You Were Once There - Chapter One

    Hello! It's Serrurie, here for a review. Let's dive in: The Good Stuff: You are one of the most amazing writers when it comes to description. I've never even read ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 3 : From Me To You

    Hi! It's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff: This is a beautiful piece, and I love your descriptions. Every detail seems so sincere, as if it came ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Other Re: WIP lCA

    Hi! It's Serrurie, Here to leave you a review! The Good Stuff: I really like how the characters interact in the beginning. They're very dramatic, with a lot of movement, ...

    Sep 30, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Shadow's Rising Chapter 9 (part 2)

    I've never read this before, but it looks quite interesting, and I love dragons! Let's dive in. The good stuff: Your grammar is amazing! Never do I see someone who ...

    Sep 22, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Main Character Syndrome of Aynnhailleah Angel Astrid: Episode 2.2

    Ooh. A new story seems to have appeared! Let's Dive In! PLEASE DON'T READ THIS YET. I haven't read the whole story but wanted to give this a quick review! ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Short Story » General, Narrative Re: Time & Space (Part 2)

    Ooh...Looks like there's another chapter to this marvelous story! Let's Dive In! The Good Stuff ฅ ̳͒•ˑ̫• ̳͒ฅ: This story has a good depth of emotion: Very bitter, very subtle...It's ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 1: Tryst With Destiny

    Hey! For some reason I reviewed your second chapter first, but the description you added for this is just so amazing! It perfectly describes the story whilst also leaving a ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Invisible Chains

    Wow. Wow, wow, wow. It feels hard to capture the thoughts of a writer like you do. But you did this perfectly. Chef's kiss. 👍 I love all of the ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Chapter 2 : My You

    Hey-o! Looks like an interesting story you have! Let’s dive in! 😺What I like: You describe things very well!The way you described the siren was very detailed, and I can ...

    Sep 4, 2023
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Technology Re: The AI war

    Hey-o! I see a good story to review! Let’s dive in. This seems to be a really good story, but I feel that in a few places there could have ...

    Sep 4, 2023


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