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Re: Fabrication: Shikri - Day 2
Hey, it's Serrurie, here for a review! I just read chapter one so I'm here for chapter 2: The Good Stuff - An amazing cover yet again (but that was ...
Jul 23, 2024 -
Re: Fabrication: Shikri - Day 1
Wait, am I seeing this correctly? Christian Sci-fi? I HAVE to read this! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - First off, that's a great cover! You're very talented :D ...
Jul 22, 2024 -
Re: Of Victory and Death - Chapter 1: The Visitation
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! I've been meaning to review this for a while just because of that amazing cover (seriously, you are an artist). Anyways, let's ...
Jul 20, 2024 -
Re: Vast Cerulean
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff For Gentle Azure - This poem has a lighthearted feel (which is appreciated since most poems ...
Jul 19, 2024 -
Re: Flightless: Chapter 1
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! The Good Stuff - Your writing is nearly free of grammatical errors. It reads smoothly and tells a thorough plot for the ...
Jul 17, 2024 -
Re: Hum
Hey! I just read your poem 'cry with me' so I thought I would pop in to review this too. First off, the imagery in this poem is vivid. It's ...
Jul 17, 2024 -
Re: cry with me
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! This poem shows off an emotion that I'd like to call dull grief. Even though the character in this poem is clearly ...
Jul 17, 2024 -
Re: The Staircase: Leading to Archaic Era (Part 1)
Hey, I just reviewed your poem so I thought I'd read this too! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This has a very interesting start with a dark staircase ...
Jul 16, 2024 -
Re: Cont de Feerie (Fairy-Tale)
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! First off, the French title is really beautiful and makes this poem unique. I would suggest italicizing it, however. I really liked ...
Jul 16, 2024 -
Re: Ghosted - Chapter 2 - Funeral
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - There are a lot of strong emotions packed into this chapter which you wrote beautifully. ...
Jul 16, 2024 -
Re: draft of a short story
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - We're immediately greeted with a sense of urgency and fast pace which keeps readers hooked ...
Jul 15, 2024 -
Re: Ghosted - Chapter 1 - death
Hey, it's Serrrurie! I've seen this for a little while but never got around to it. Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - That twist was super unexpected! I think ...
Jul 15, 2024 -
Re: a poem about missing
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - This poem packs a lot of emotion but in a way different than what I ...
Jul 14, 2024 -
Re: Libraries | Chapter 2 | Oh no.
Hey, it's Serrurie! I'm back for chapter 2! Let's dive in: The Good Stuff - We get to see more of Eden's star iconic star personality - A lot of ...
Jul 14, 2024 -
Re: Libraries | Chapter One| A Normal Saturday...?
Hey, it's Serrurie, here to leave a review! This seems pretty interesting so far, so let's dive in: The Good Stuff -I really love the humor that the MC has ...
Jul 13, 2024