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Re: Lonely
Hello, here for a review ^_^ This is a beautiful poem. I love the amazing descriptions that you place in to describe the burden of loneliness. You use lovely grammar ...
Jan 4, 2015 -
Re: Respect Women
Hello, here for a review. This is very...interesting. You have a very inspirational tone to it as you rant on about how women are still not as respected as they ...
Jan 3, 2015 -
Re: The Continuation of Grief
Hello, I'm here to review your poem :D This is a beautifully worded poem! I love how you have used phrases like weaving incandescently :D By using free verse, you ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Will
Hello, happy review day chum! The description in this was amazing! It gripped me as a reader and pulled me to an interesting end. I like how you stayed true ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Typo Alley~G Part Two
Hello, happy review day! This was a very interesting chapter, I haven't read the first one yet so excuse me if I correct anything that does not need correcting :D ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: In War
Hello, happy review day! I like it. I honestly do! I loved how all the lines are up to a few words only. By splitting each word off to their ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Test
Hello, happy review day! This is a very interesting short story which kept me reading all the way through. The grammar was amazing and it was a very fun work. ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Couplet Poem; Love
Hello, happy review day! I love how within two lines, you create such beautiful meaning. Whilst it's so short, it's so long. You create a story of a how the ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: No Name
Hello, happy review day! This is a very interesting poem that made me think. I like it when poems do that, it really grips me. Like Rydia said, I think ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Hope
Hello, happy review day! This is a very depressing poem. I love how you start off the poem with the idea of despair eating you from the inside. It makes ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Glass
Hello, happy review day! I love how this poem stays true to the imagery of problems with sight. The idea of desperation created when you talk about how the character ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: No more
Hello, happy review day! This is a very beautiful poem, your sights on souls really capture and intrigue the reader. I like how you talk about the idea that we ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: Transgender
Hello, happy review day! Wow. This poem hits the reader hard as they sit tense throughout the rant about the speakers rights. The words are really powerful and they make ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: The Dream
Hello, happy review day! I love this poem. It keeps to the rhyming scheme, it is interesting and it is relatable! I dream a lot. I love how simplistic this ...
Dec 28, 2014 -
Re: three short poems
Hello, happy review day! These poems were short... But interesting! I can see what you were trying to get at when writing these but the descriptions are quite vague... Overall ...
Dec 28, 2014
