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  • Short Story » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: The Flight

    Hello, happy review day! This was a very touching story. Your descriptions and delicate imagery grab the reader and tear them to shreds as they are hid hard in the ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Humor Re: I Hate Bugs

    Hello, happy review day! ^-^ This was a vey funny work, I really liked how you ranted about how other people find bugs cute XD you use repetition which impacts ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Short Story » Horror, Fanfiction Re: W3bch@t

    Hello, happy review day! This, my friend was absolutely amazing"! You didn't loose my interest at any point:D I love how effective this was, the fact that you trick the ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: This Feeling

    Hello, truth, happy review day! (Nooooo I shouldn't have read the previous comment!) This is a very impactful poem for the reader. You use dramatic imagery which drags them down ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Magazine

    Hello, happy review day! Your imagery and descriptions in this are amazing. The words you use to start the poem slip off my tongue as I run through the lines. ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The one you love

    Hello chrissy, happy review day! First of all I would like to say that I like the uniqueness of your structure. By placing it to the right side instead of ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If You Were a Letter

    Hello, happy review day! I like how you used a letter to describe someone. You can really picture the idea of it being difficult at first but once you have ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Waterfall lagoon where it rains diamond rocks

    Hello, happy review day! This is a very interesting poem that hooked me quite quickly. You use amazing imagery to influence the point that a reader can create for themselves. ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: Inferno

    Hello, happy review day! Whilst I have not read Dante's inferno I still have a review for you. You keep up a constant rhyme scheme throughout which keeps the rhythm ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Satire Re: Clockwork Gears

    Hello, happy review day! This was an interesting poem that kept me reading throughout. You use amazing grammar and details which make it such a beautiful poem to read. I ...

    Jan 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: A Butterfly Loses Its Wings

    Heyyo madisonfrevert! I'm here to review your work. Before I begin, I would have to say this is more of an extremely short story than a poem. If you were ...

    Jan 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Horror, Realistic Re: Insanity

    Hello, I'm here to review your poem. You use mind swirling imagery to describe the groaning insanity and hatred that spouts within humanity. Phrases like: goes the blood like the ...

    Jan 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: My First Day Back from Winter Break

    Hello, Em101cats, I'm here to review your poem. I really like this. It's short, it's simple, it's interesting and it's reflective. I like how you managed to keep to two ...

    Jan 9, 2015
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: with respect to distant stars

    Hello Daisuki, I'm here for a review :D The way you start this off is very empowering. You do well in grabbing and then reeling the reader in as they ...

    Jan 9, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Thin

    Hi, here for a review. You use lovely descriptions to tell the story of blowing a bubble(defiantly didn't cheat) in an enhanced detail which just makes the whole thing a ...

    Jan 6, 2015


Isn't it funny how day by day nothing changes but when you look back, everything's different?
— C.S. Lewis