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Re: The Flight
Hello, happy review day! This was a very touching story. Your descriptions and delicate imagery grab the reader and tear them to shreds as they are hid hard in the ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: I Hate Bugs
Hello, happy review day! ^-^ This was a vey funny work, I really liked how you ranted about how other people find bugs cute XD you use repetition which impacts ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: W3bch@t
Hello, happy review day! This, my friend was absolutely amazing"! You didn't loose my interest at any point:D I love how effective this was, the fact that you trick the ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: This Feeling
Hello, truth, happy review day! (Nooooo I shouldn't have read the previous comment!) This is a very impactful poem for the reader. You use dramatic imagery which drags them down ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Magazine
Hello, happy review day! Your imagery and descriptions in this are amazing. The words you use to start the poem slip off my tongue as I run through the lines. ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: The one you love
Hello chrissy, happy review day! First of all I would like to say that I like the uniqueness of your structure. By placing it to the right side instead of ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: If You Were a Letter
Hello, happy review day! I like how you used a letter to describe someone. You can really picture the idea of it being difficult at first but once you have ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Waterfall lagoon where it rains diamond rocks
Hello, happy review day! This is a very interesting poem that hooked me quite quickly. You use amazing imagery to influence the point that a reader can create for themselves. ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Inferno
Hello, happy review day! Whilst I have not read Dante's inferno I still have a review for you. You keep up a constant rhyme scheme throughout which keeps the rhythm ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Clockwork Gears
Hello, happy review day! This was an interesting poem that kept me reading throughout. You use amazing grammar and details which make it such a beautiful poem to read. I ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: A Butterfly Loses Its Wings
Heyyo madisonfrevert! I'm here to review your work. Before I begin, I would have to say this is more of an extremely short story than a poem. If you were ...
Jan 16, 2015 -
Re: Insanity
Hello, I'm here to review your poem. You use mind swirling imagery to describe the groaning insanity and hatred that spouts within humanity. Phrases like: goes the blood like the ...
Jan 12, 2015 -
Re: My First Day Back from Winter Break
Hello, Em101cats, I'm here to review your poem. I really like this. It's short, it's simple, it's interesting and it's reflective. I like how you managed to keep to two ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: with respect to distant stars
Hello Daisuki, I'm here for a review :D The way you start this off is very empowering. You do well in grabbing and then reeling the reader in as they ...
Jan 9, 2015 -
Re: Thin
Hi, here for a review. You use lovely descriptions to tell the story of blowing a bubble(defiantly didn't cheat) in an enhanced detail which just makes the whole thing a ...
Jan 6, 2015
