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Re: Ink ~ Chapter Four
Hello there, A Boy from the Future is here to review your precious work... First of all some nitpicks... Or I could offer myself instead of her, would he take ...
Jun 24, 2013 -
Re: Deaths Angel: The Reunion - Prologue
Hello there ! A Boy from the future is here to review your work... So, Other reviewers have done a great job and grammatical analysis has been done as I ...
Jun 22, 2013 -
Re: Raindrops and Raspberry
Hello gauravkundu32 is here to review:- I really like this poem. But I could not understand why have you put the whole poem in a strange manner. I like the ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: The Diary of a Cat Fanatic- Chapter 1
hey there A BOY From the Future is here for his short review of this precious work-- I would divide this review into few parts:- 1.) Grammar:- I could not ...
Jun 20, 2013 -
Re: Heavens above...prologue
Hi there! I am a boy from the Future to review your precious work... So at first I wanna say that you have done a marvelous job and I like ...
Jun 6, 2013 -
Re: Anger Issues
Ah this story has really drawn me in. I feel sad for William and I am angry at Jake. You've done a great job with characterization and dialogues. They feel ...
Jun 4, 2013 -
Re: Steel Crow
Hi! gauravkundu32 is here to review your work First of all, I'd say that critics have already done a great job and there is nothing left for me to say ...
Jun 3, 2013 -
Re: Disaster Zone: Chapter One: Some Girl
Hello there! A Boy from The Future is here for a short review of this work- I am not much experienced as I am a newbie here so I won't ...
Jun 2, 2013 -
Re: TOMORROW: Trials of the Lost Swallows Chapter Four
Hello there! I beg pardon for the delay. I was very busy with the exams. So as now I am free I can do some reviews. As I can see ...
May 30, 2013 -
Re: Ruthless Hurricanes and Gentle Showers
Hello there , this is a boy from the Future to review your poem............ At first I'd like to say that this poem is great and contains a great message ...
May 4, 2013 -
Re: 911-chapter 1
A boy from the future is here again to do a short review your beautiful work............. First of all I welcome you to YWS ! and congrats to you for ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Keep In the Silence
Hello there. Boy from the future is here to review your work......... First of all we welcome you in Young Writer's Society. Now about your story. This story seems to ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Untitled Part 1
gaurav is here for his short review of this prose piece for creativitea! . First of all I am a beginner in this field and new to this site. Do ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Alice
Wow! this is amazing piece of prose . Being said that I'd like to say, a little bit more information can something what we call icing on a cake but ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: Reflections about the Reflector
So here's a short review of this article by gauravkundu32 This article is awesome to say the least. You've described about the mirror in every way possible which quite fascinates ...
Apr 27, 2013
