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I really like it! Everything was great, i didn't see any grammar errors or anything at all. Great job in starting a story, I'm definitely excited to read the next ...

WOW, it's like you're inside of my head! I can so relate and i think a lot of people will, which is really important when you're writing. I loved the ...

That brought me pretty close to tears, it was really touching and i can completely relate. Even now, it feels like his ghost is haunting me, and eventhough part of ...

No way this is your worst poem, i can't imagine how good you're other stuff is. Honestly i really liked it. It was really fascinating. A little confusing at first ...

That was sooooo good. I can relate; last year i had writer's block for over four months and i thought i was going to die from all my pent up ...

This was REALLY nose was literally an inch from the screen, the poem drew me in because I can definitely relate. I'm not usually one for couplets but this flowed ...

I really liked this poem!!! It was definitely something i'll remember. Sometimes i feel the same way, almost as if i'm living inside another persons body and the title that ...

It was good but i would want to see more emotion in it. You kept repeating "I am here" and it was alright because it gave off a sense of ...

I really liked it...scratch that, i loved it! I didn't see that many gramatical errors or anything. Everyone's got that little devil sitting on there shoulder, i could really imagine ...

Wow, this was a really good poem. It deals with a conflict that i think a lot of kids feel with their parents. It's kind of a love hate relationship. ...

I won't lie, i was laughing throughout this entire poem. It's really refreshing to read a poem like this, where it's not all superdramatic. I really liked how lighthearted it ...

Great poem, i Really liked it. Short, sweet and to the point. I don't know how to explain it, but you're poem was able to encapture everything that i've been ...

I liked the original but I LOVED this funny, it definitely pulls you in right away. It was a very interesting format. I've read books in letter and email format, ...

That was pretty spectacular... I didn't see any mistakes, everything was pretty great. Just a few grammar things here and there. But the story was very touching, i love that ...

Wow, that really makes you think. It will definitely take me a while to decipher who "they" are. But overall, i really like the passionate language you used and you ...