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Hi, You got a good story because of the well-written plots. I like it. Um, there were some errors and here's some of them. First, [The thought of the girls ...

Hi. I couldn't say I love this but still, I like it because my childhood were not as great as this. Pity on me. Anyways, I could imagine what was ...

Hi. I wasn't good with reviewing, so correct me if I made any mistake. You created a interesting world inside your story. I couldn't say much but you got many ...

Hi. This story was fine. I love the way you write about the characters like when you described Cyan as the ghost. I understand the points of this story because ...

Hi. You were writing a good story. It was simple and I chuckled a bit. The characters were somewhat like infinite to me. I didn't grasped the total of the ...

Hi.. Ha..ha..ha..ha.. Surely, this story was so fun..funny! I loved and enjoyed it. Whoa! It was making me remembered about me and my friend were playing a weird-chain-storytelling. The teacher ...

Hi. A river of review is flowing by. Your story was somewhat of interesting. Jealousy is a dangerous thing after all. I didn't feel sorry at all for that Sept. ...

Hi... Erm... Quite a review you got here...(deep sigh) Anyway, you have a great story right here, my eyes won't stop reading yours. And I chuckled a bit. Anyway, you ...

Oh no!! My eyes were wounded when I read this. I couldn't do this great poem even I tried it. It's so hard to write a short and simple poem ...

Hi.. A poem about blanket! Seriously! I love it. Although it looked like more a story to me but if you could separate your stanzas, it would seems great. It ...

Hello..welcome to YMS..I guess. The title of your story was like captivating. I hate saying this but I understand how the main character felt. Sad and green with envy. There ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! As for me I entered yesterday and I hope we're going to be like somewhat, friends. So, your poem about Harry Potter, I must admit ...

Hi. Hallo, let see here. Oh! I had secret loves too and a lot of them. This was great; I was scared. Scared, if the things you wrote are true ...

Hi. I hate you...(sob..sob...) Why did have to ask questions like that? When I was trying to answer them. My heart was broken to thousands pieces. Enough with the drama ...

Hallo. As my eyes were flowing, reading your story, they sometimes were full with tears. I love this story. You used some extraordinary words that I found interesting. I found ...