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Re: Lost...TW: Depression/mental health theme
I literally love this poem, I feel like you portray images across really well without getting too descriptive. I think I'll start off with my praises. I appreciate how the ...
Apr 10, 2021 -
Re: Slavery
I feel like everyone should have to read this. And like not in a school setting because I think that ruins everything. Like people should all, at one point in ...
Mar 12, 2021 -
Re: The people's leader
First off: Wow, what a powerful piece Second off: I think that you really nailed some topics that many people struggle to understand. The first of which is when people ...
Mar 10, 2021 -
Re: I can't Escape
Ok so I'm just gonna jump right into this, Overall I think that there are a lot of bold and powerful ideas here. I can definitely see the emotion and ...
Mar 9, 2021 -
Re: Not the First Goodbye
OH. MY. GOD. My first impression was this; "huh it's kinda a small poem, eh it's probably not going to be that good.". UH LET'S JUST SAY I WAS VERY ...
Mar 9, 2021 -
Re: Online Learning
I literally love this piece so much! It encompases what online learning is really like without getting confusing. I loved the structure of the lines. I think it added to ...
Feb 12, 2021 -
Re: The case of the missing brain
Heyy!!! So I want to start off by saying that LOVE this piece, it's do decidedly abstract whilst also giving the audience concrete details in the beginning. My absolute favorite ...
Feb 12, 2021 -
Re: Ch 7: a good as well as bad news
Hey there! You suggested I write a review for you, so here I am! The first thing I have to say is that I liked how the chapter opens with ...
Feb 9, 2021 -
Re: decision: the key to life
I think that this piece is definitely abstract, but it's also decidedly concrete. It reminded me of the butterfly effect, how everything has a direct effect on everything else. How ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: i am numb
This poem is truly moving. I felt that I could relate with many of the struggles mentioned. And I think that even if someone didn't struggle with issues such as ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: The Ballet of Tears
Hi there! First of all... Oh my god, this is amazing!!! The twist at the end made the entire poem take on a completely different vibe. I was NOT expecting ...
Feb 7, 2021 -
Re: White lies
Hi! I just thought you should know that this poem is truly one of the most eloquent pieces I have ever written. My favorite line is "With curtesy do I ...
Feb 7, 2021
