freedomgirl

your story is so good, what I like about is that it has a lot of details, and you can descripe the emotions easily, I didn't read the first part ...

i reaalllyy realllyyy like the idea of this poem, it is short but you can understand what is going on and it was simple but good........nice job,keep writing :)

i really like the idea of the story and i have to say it is the first time i read a story like this so it was unusual for me ...

really really really beautiful what you have write specially the part of "the look of your parents", I was thinking in the same thing today and you have right 100% ...

we all miss to be kids and young again because when you were kid you didn't have problems to think of or care about what others will say about you ...

hey i just want to say that your poetry is beautiful because you could make the personality more real and honest and you can see that she/he is confusing and ...

love can be complecated sometimes and when we are in a relationship with someone we always want him to express his feelings and show us his love but when he ...

really really beautiful because it is really short but has a lot and lot of meanings and beautiful words and in only six lines you can see a whole story ...

i like your idea and your way of writing and it's true what you have said because you can find a lot of realtionships where they try to make their ...

you have right my friend and it's true in this life if we don't face our problems it will hunts us untill it kills us, we need to be brave ...

i really like it, really good :)