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This was a very great and powerful poem. It caught me on the front page. It portrays a teenager's life quite well, considering a lot of teenagers feel neglacted and ...

Hi there! Here by request! Comments Title : Your title was good, at least for me, since I'm a band geek. Intro : Your intro was very excellent! At first, ...

Hi there! This is a bit long, so I didn't get a chance to look over the whole thing, but I picked up a few things in the parts I ...

Hi there! Here as requested! In the mountains of Isstern in the kingdom of Vil, where lived a large group of trolls. Where should be there. Also, your title kind ...

I have to be honest: when I first read this, I didn't read too much into it, like Reyu, and thought it was one of those bad examples you read ...

Hi there! They say that the past is a ghost, the future a dream, and all we ever have is now. My saying is backwards. The past is all I ...

Hey! This is my only nitpick: I remember wishing to be like you. Everyone loves you. Your charm and jokes hook every girl in the room, hook, line, and sinker. ...

Hey! The day you brother pulled up in front of our house and started loading all of our furniture into his van. 'You' should be 'your'. :wink: Over all : ...

I agree with Mars. Wouldn't Rachel be a little reluctant to let him go? If you decide to give Sage siblings, it could go two ways: i) Sage can be ...

Hello! Being a car freak myself, your title caught my attention. I agree with A.C.; the semi-colons seem to break it up a bit much. Other than that, there was ...

Evi! Your title reeled me in, because I am currently working on a story about Angels. I read the first sentence and was immediatly hooked. As I was reading, I ...

Hey! I'm fragile, here to the review rescue! Why did the Angles need him? Too soon it seemed He’d gone. Angles should be angels. :wink: Don't worry; a lot of ...

Rosey! :D I'm finally reviewing one of your stories. Sadly, I don't think I reviewed any of your previous ones. :shock: :( First off: Thalassa. How on earth do you ...

Hahha, I literally just read your little snipit with the poll on it, so when I found this, I gasped. I really liked this. I liked the way you made ...

Hi there! Lucyy gave a very detailed review, so mine might be a smidge short. :wink: I miss that the most ; the sun . I didn't mind that I ...