florageis

Hello. This was a great story so far. It took unexpected twists and turns and overall left me in suspense. It sounds like it will be successful depending on where ...

Hello, how are you? I am Flora and I will review your writing. I found it to be rather mysterious and sketchy. I loved the plot it was a good ...

Even though this is the very first chapter, I have to say, I already made a judgement that it is the most fascinating of the few wolf tales i read. ...

A great piece!You had correct wording for your descriptions. I love traditional words. I was "whisked away" by the was how i felt about books word for word.There was not ...

You wrote in first person which made the story easier to comprehend. The dialogue was loaded. Organize the chapter with better punctuation and grammar. Give more details outside the dialogue.You ...

Wow great flow and rhythm. This poem gave me a fluttery feeling inside because it was so romantic. Beautiful word collection.There was a good rhyming scheme so beautiful. A powerful ...

There were a few grammar errors that i noticed in the story which i counted as just a few misspellings.You gave really disgusting yet vivid imagery. You failed to provide ...

It was a great start.You didn't make too many grammar mistakes. I did find some mistakes but nothing to shabby.I liked how you added a plot to the very beginning. ...

This poem had great flow and beautiful rhythm. It was altogether great. It deserves a great review. it just gave me a sense of sorrow in the last two lines. ...

Your poem was great with nice sensory detail. Not a lot of changes are needed except...perhaps make it flow a little better. You have a good idea just not with ...

Hello awesomesauce. Good chapter. Your chapter was grasping although we needed more details. You might of wanted to give off a suspenseful effect but more information wont hurt. Your story ...

It sounded like a suicide note. Anyways,The beauty captured me right away. It was a relaxing poem that had a heart of a young dreamer. It made me sad. I ...

It was a remarkable account of a guy being visited by his soulmate. I loved how you transitioned the story from a depressing setting to a beautiful romantic ending! you ...

I loved the passion and emotions swirling around this very story. It made me feel the same anger of the little child without parents. It is common people either lose ...

I dont know what were you trying to imply in your poem. The poem needs more detail. It looks like you didnt put in enough material that is needed for ...