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Hi person! :) I have to agree with the previous reviewers - the part where you talk about cold being comforting should be either expanded upon, or removed. It just ...

I just really, really like this. There's nothing I can criticize, I'm afraid. The beginning is very whimsical and strange, and it stays that way. I have never seen a ...

First of all, I agree with the previous reviewer on pretty much everything. This is good for a first post on this website - the idea is to improve, after ...

I love this poem - it's written uniquely. You have a very interesting style, and the imagery here is beautiful and relatable. I agree a lot with the previous reviewer: ...

Ah, this is an intriguing idea :) I've read a lot of Agatha Christie, as you probably have, and it always seems to work out this way in her novels. ...

Hi! I like the title of this poem, and this part especially - "Little lizard, curled and cold, shriveled in the shadows; Skin- still green, but glass eyes stare off ...

The beginning of this poem was very strong and melancholily (is that a word?) beautiful; the ending stanza was simple and rueful. It flows like...well, a liquid. There is no ...

Beautifully written - a shame that this poem has so few reviews so far. I like the strange number of syllables per line - sounds to be an odd number. ...

Before I do anything, I'll nitpick :) "When I walk down the infamous hallways of Excelsior Springs Middle School, I see not the smiling faces and good students calmly sauntering ...

Hi! Here to review, obviously :) I like this fleeting little stream of consciousness, and to think that the dirt is not dead...made me think indeed. After all, thinking makes ...

Wow....this poem honestly, truly made me cry. I'm crying right now. Wow. That was beautiful, and if you don't win that contest...wow. Anyway, this is truly a work of art. ...

Hi person (assuming you are one)! I've never watched Dr. Who in my life (don't judge) but this was amusing and pleasant to read, and now I want to watch ...

I like this poem, it gives a desolate, desparate, yet hopeful feeling, and the imagery is wonderful. I do have some suggestions for ya - I am not sure if ...

I don't even know what to say about this poem - it's brilliant. The rhyming is gentle and lilting, like the sound you're describing in it. It's as if someone's ...

Wow - this is good. Normally I'm not a fan of drama, but this was astounding. I don't know why, there was just something about it that made me want ...