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Hi Shauna242, Felistia here with a short review on your short story. Nice story, very interesting. I will start with the nit-pick You have a few grammar problems. The first ...

Hi Cailey, Felistia here with a short review on your short story. First off, I love the idea of sirens and the way you describe them in this story is ...

Hi FallWolf, Felistia here with a short review on you short story. You obviously have a talent for description, as it was show cased in this story. Well done. I ...

Hi tigeraye, Felistia here with a short review of your work. Firstly I love the opening, it starts the story off well and your descriptions in here are great. Well ...

Hi FallWolf, Felistia here with a short review on your story. First note, your description is off the chart fantastic. You bring the characters and the world they live in ...

Hi OMGhamsterdweeb, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. I will start with the good and work to the bad. First I love your rhyming scheme, it is ...

Hi LadyNeko, Felistia here with a short review on your poem. First congratulations on posting your first work on YWS. Now for the review. I like you used spiders to ...

Hi 1swimgirl, Felistai here with a short review on your poem. Firstly welcome to YWS and congratulations on posting your first poem. Now on with the review. The idea you ...

Hi chhlovebooks, Felistia here with a review and some comments. I will start with the things I really liked: A river, a river, of sparkling silver, spilling out 'cross the ...

Hi SuperAnimalCrossing, Felistia here with a review. I will read from the top of your chapter downward and give the review as I go. First sentence: I like it, but ...

Hi Arathorth, Felistia here with a short review. Nice imagery and I like the concept. I love that the stars can speak in your poem and the different ways you ...

Hi LeftyWriter, Felistia here with a short review. I love autumn, even though where I come from the trees stay green and it never snows. The description in here is ...

Hi Lightsong, Felistia here with a short review. What an interesting poem. I haven't anything like this before, so well done for the creativity. I feel like this is a ...

Hi tigeraye, Felistia here with a review. Firstly, this is a big improvement compered to the last part of the story I read. You explained where the characters were from ...

Hi marlowbaines, Felistia here with a short review. I love the start of your story and wish there was a first chapter for me to read. I know that most ...