Okay, I'm super bored and have, like, no inspiration right now. These are bits and pieces of inspiration that I can't get my brain to work off of, so I might as well give them to you, random reader! Most of these with stink in terms of grammer, punctuation, etc.
I have so many dreams and alternate realities floating through my head, I no longer know what is real and what isn't anymore. Such is the curse of a writer.
Everyone deserves a chance to go home, and I hope... someday... I will too.
Love, for me,is like a song rising in my chest and entwining in my soul. Someday, I hope to find the words so I may join it in harmony.
She was nothing but a mirror, reflecting what she saw. But not everyone liked their reflection.
He held a worn piece of paper up to the light. It was a list, which read, Forever Emotions: 1. Grief, 2. Guilt, 3. Hate, 4. Love. I looked it over carefully, before turning my gaze back to him. "Okay," I said,"so if these are your 'forever emotions' or what ever you call them, and if they can linger with you forever, which one is the strongest?" He smiled back at me. "That, my dear, is something you'd have to find out for yourself."
A river, a river, of sparkling silver, spilling out 'cross the darkening sky.
What does it mean to be human?
Children, like puppies, are adorable until you actually have one.
Look, I don't think you understand what life means to me. To me, life is nothing more than a strange, beautiful nightmare meant to hide our eyes from reality. Death isn't some horrible end to be afraid of. Dying means finally waking up.
I wish to return to the land of dreams.
Her dying song echoed out across the darkness.
One of the most beautiful things in life to do is to find someone broken and bleeding, and to build them back up again. Teach them to trust others, help them learn to forgive. Prove you care every day, protect them when you must, and show them what it means to love. And no matter what, always hold them close to your heart.One of the hardest things to do in life? Let them go...
He blew out the candle, and with a small, solemn good night, he left.
Aren't the best things in life just dreams put to words?
His eyes were as deep and unreadable as the sea.
His look softened into one of pure longing. Gently he placed a kiss on her forehead, and said, "________". (insert something, such as 'I love you', 'Good bye', or perhaps, 'Good night')
Broken hearts shall never die.
Everyone always thought that his smile was seemed to shine with it's own inner light, but in reality, he was just using that cheerful grin to reflect the beauty of the world. (If you want it sad or creepy, add 'The charm in that smile though, was nothing but a mask to hide what he felt inside. Oh, how much he hid with that simple grin.')
Push yourself to be stronger. Not physically, but mentally. You are stronger than you think you are.
Home is where you feel loved, not for what you are, but for who you are.
Let your secret self be beautiful, fill it with the want to be kind. Teach it to heal others, and most of all, tell it to be really bad at keeping secrets. (if you don't get it, it is basically saying, tell your secret self to be really bad at keeping itself a secret)
I don't know whether or not I'm strong enough to love.
There is only one kind of magic, and it is called love.
I am a collector. You may see pieces of junk and jewels, stacks of song and bottles of rain. You might even assume that these objects are what I collect, along with everything before you. I say that you are right, to an extent. However, you need to look deeper if you want to see what these "simple" things truly are. I am a collector of memories, and this is my collection! (After this sentence, start describing some magical change that happens to the various objects)
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Hello, steampowered here to clear this from the Green Room! It’s not going to be a review as such, but if this doesn’t get another review then it’ll be hanging around for a long time to come.
Like Rosendorn’s already said, I’d really advise you put this in the forums so it gets more traffic; once literary works are out of the Green Room they often fall into obscurity so you’re unlikely to get many more reads on it. Also, posting literary works costs points.
Your ideas definitely look interesting! They remind me of something similar I once did, when I wrote a load of writing prompts (and then lost them, but that’s a different story) I would advise splitting the ideas up more with bullet points, since at the moment they all seem to run into one another, but that’s really all the feedback I can give.
Best of luck with your writing!
-steampowered-
Heya!
Instead of putting these in the literary forums, you can stick them in Plot Bunny Adoption. Then the'll be found a little more easily, and you don't have to spend points on it.
~Rosey
Thanks! i didn't even know that actually existed, lol! XD
Hi chhlovebooks, Felistia here with a review and some comments.
I will start with the things I really liked: A river, a river, of sparkling silver, spilling out 'cross the darkening sky. This line is an excellent description and makes me think of the milk way.
This one is just plain funny: Children, like puppies, are adorable until you actually have one.
This is yet another great description, but with emotion: His eyes were as deep and unreadable as the sea.
These are the parts that I would use in one of my stories or poems. The other's you wrote wouldn't fit into one of my works, but would definitely work in someone else's work. I don't write romantic stories or poems, so the others would be a waste on me.
Well done. I really like the ideas you have here and the ones I listed above I will almost certainly use with your permission. Keep writing and I hope you have a great day\night.
Feel free to use whatever you like! I put these up here to be used, so go ahead. Thanks for the review, even if my thing didn't really need one. It's still nice to learn what people think, though. Have a good day/night to you as well!