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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Drenched Field

    Hi NicolMemo, Felistia here with a review on your poem. :D I prefer this format to the last one I reviewed, I find it easier to read and over all ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: kaiyō, sora no asai

    Hi NicolMemo, Felistia here with a review on your poem. :D Firstly, interesting format. I don't often read poems in this format, because I find it a little confusing most ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: -----------

    Hi myjaspercat, Felistia back for another review on your story. :D Okay so this chapter has a lot of beautiful description and a lot off realistic feelings from the characters, ...

    Dec 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Realistic Re: Newcastle Garden Fairy

    Hi FerranWright, Felistia here with a review on your poem. :D I love that you took a break from ugly goblins and rude trolls and wrote a poem about a ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: .

    Hi HolographicLadybug, Felistia here with a review on your novel. Story: So I am guessing that you are picking up a whole lot of characters and then are going to ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: -----------------

    Hi myjaspercat, Felistia here with a review on your prologue. :D Story: The story is so interesting at the moment, a bit confusing but still very interesting. I would advise ...

    Dec 25, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: Glaciers: Prologue

    Hi Anico146, Felistia here with a review on your work. :D First off, welcome to YWS. I hope you have a great time here. :D Now on with the review. ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Those Three Words

    Hi InfiniteRectangles, Felistia here with the review you requested. :D Okay so I am just going to say that I am not as good at reviewing poetry compered to short ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Short Story » Satire, Humor Re: The Creativity Epidemic

    Hi InfiniteRectangles, Felistia here with the review you requested. Firstly I can't believe no on has reviewed you yet or given you more likes than you already have. Okay now ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unlucky Ricky

    Hi XxXTheSwordsmanXxX, Felistia here with a review on your short story. Story: I was a little confused in the beginning to what the story was about as it was a ...

    Dec 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: The Plight of Becoming an Adult

    Hi InfiniteRectangles, Felistia here with the review you requested. :D This is an unusual set up for a poem, but surprisingly it works pretty well. You have a little bit ...

    Dec 21, 2015
  • Short Story » Narrative, Humor Re: Of Slush and Snowmen

    Hi UnicornWRunnyRainbow, Felistia here with a review on your short story. :D Story: So over all the story is sweet. I like that you made such a simple thing like ...

    Dec 21, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: New Haven: Chapter 6: Was He Okay?

    Hi MadWriter, Felistia here with another review on your novel. I am so glad that you decided to carry on writing the flash back and not just leave it in ...

    Dec 18, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: In the Absence of Stars - 1.2

    Hi Jericho, Felistia here with the review you requested. :D Story: The story is getting more interesting as you explain the characters back grounds. You are leaving the reader with ...

    Dec 18, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Hands

    Hi AustereMelodies, Felistia here with a review on your poem. :D First I really like the continuous rhyming here (Blame, Flame, Shame,) It is very fun to read and helps ...

    Dec 17, 2015


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