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Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts I got the feeling that this was a bit of a filler chapter as not ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Chapter plot: Since I've just jumped into the middle of the story with out reading ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks The Refreshing winds flows through my hair as we make our way through the Valley of ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Going forward in our Adventure, Marl and I continued on the path her father told her ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Blood slipped to the floor, staining into the pelt laid as a carpet. Now while this ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts Theme: I'm really in two minds when it comes to this lyric. On the one ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Observations I took a deep breath in, trying to breathe without getting grime and dust inside my ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Overall thoughts It's good to see that Re'ana is accepting Fang for how he is. She also ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Re’ana witnessed the wolf’s collapse to the earth and heard his pain-filled cries. She wanted to ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks Re’ana quickly understood that the wolf was saving her life. Now why can't she realize that ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “He might be your friend,” Re’ana snapped back, “but he is just a brutish, warmongering guard ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Guard! Execute this man for his threats and…” Re’ana commanded before a hand cut her off ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “I hope you know what you’re doing. I knew I should have chosen that other horse,” ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks “Royalty or not you still have to pay for it!” the baker said reaching for the ...

Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Nit-picks When morning finally dawned You tend to say this a lot in your story. This like ...