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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Spoiled Rotten

    Hi soundofmind, Felistia here with a quick review for you on this wonderful day. :D First a quick punctuation error. :D From all the sweet but empty words there should ...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: When I Realize

    Hi CateRose17, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like the nightmarish theme you had for this poem. The first two words ...

    Jun 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Fantasy Re: A Bard's Tale

    Hi Zackymas, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like the theme you have in here. As I said in my last ...

    Jun 2, 2016
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I Can't Save You

    Hi niteowl, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Meaning: I really like the emotion you put in this lyric's words. You explain in the ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Warrior's Heart

    Hi Zackymas, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like the medieval theme you had running through the poem. It was an ...

    Jun 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Technology Re: Earth-Prologue

    Hi writerkitty, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Chapter plot: I am really fascinated by this post apocalyptic world you ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: trapped

    Hi gammagamerale, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: The theme through out your poem is an ominous one. A ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Last Kiss

    Hi Sec1218, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: This poem is more of a story than a theme. I ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Luna part 2

    Hi SilverBerry, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: The theme in this poem was basically the same as part ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Luna

    Hi SilverBerry, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: So the theme of this poem was around a prisoner and ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Untitled (Possibly: A Twisted Scale)

    Note to anyone reading this review. I've put everything in spoilers because this is such a wonderful and exciting story that I don't want to spoil anything. So don't even ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Absence

    Hi AliceAfternoon, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: I like that there was a food theme going through out ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Science Re: Essay for Lions

    Hi Gymnast2801, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Story plot: I really like that your entire story plot revolves around ...

    May 29, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fanfiction Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep Book 1 Chapter 5

    Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Punctuation and Grammar: It was early in the morning and the copper sun ...

    May 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Realistic Re: For Want of Water

    Hi nagE, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Story plot: Okay so the story plot was basically a survival story. ...

    May 29, 2016


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