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Re: Spoiled Rotten
Hi soundofmind, Felistia here with a quick review for you on this wonderful day. :D First a quick punctuation error. :D From all the sweet but empty words there should ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: When I Realize
Hi CateRose17, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like the nightmarish theme you had for this poem. The first two words ...
Jun 3, 2016 -
Re: A Bard's Tale
Hi Zackymas, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like the theme you have in here. As I said in my last ...
Jun 2, 2016 -
Re: I Can't Save You
Hi niteowl, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Meaning: I really like the emotion you put in this lyric's words. You explain in the ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: The Warrior's Heart
Hi Zackymas, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day. :D Theme: I really like the medieval theme you had running through the poem. It was an ...
Jun 1, 2016 -
Re: Earth-Prologue
Hi writerkitty, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Chapter plot: I am really fascinated by this post apocalyptic world you ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: trapped
Hi gammagamerale, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: The theme through out your poem is an ominous one. A ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Last Kiss
Hi Sec1218, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: This poem is more of a story than a theme. I ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Luna part 2
Hi SilverBerry, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: The theme in this poem was basically the same as part ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Luna
Hi SilverBerry, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: So the theme of this poem was around a prisoner and ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Untitled (Possibly: A Twisted Scale)
Note to anyone reading this review. I've put everything in spoilers because this is such a wonderful and exciting story that I don't want to spoil anything. So don't even ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Absence
Hi AliceAfternoon, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Theme: I like that there was a food theme going through out ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Essay for Lions
Hi Gymnast2801, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Story plot: I really like that your entire story plot revolves around ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Search For The Diamond Of The Deep Book 1 Chapter 5
Hi, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Punctuation and Grammar: It was early in the morning and the copper sun ...
May 28, 2016 -
Re: For Want of Water
Hi nagE, Felistia here with a review for you on this wonderful day and happy review day. :D Story plot: Okay so the story plot was basically a survival story. ...
May 29, 2016
