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Re: by grains
I am reminded of a dormouse. Such a small little thing. A baby. His breath is small; his lungs two little pockets of life--that shrivel up and are empty. This ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: Fatigue and love
This reminds me of someone I know. Wow. Sorry, It was just so weird for me to read this. It's REALLY familiar to me. Really.
Jun 22, 2015 -
Re: Thick Heart
Wow. Thank you soso much! I'm feeling very honored right now. I'm your first review??? Man, that's exciting. Thank you so much for your sweet feedback and encouragment
Jun 22, 2015 -
Re: White Heron {2}
Okay. I love you sososo much! Your reviews are fantastic! Thank you so much! Yes! I would love for you to keep reviewing my work! Thank you so much for ...
Jun 20, 2015 -
Re: Frankenstein
It's okay, floatingvoice. Really :)
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: when you cant understand the word omnipresent
I see. I believe I understand. One has died. The ghost is always there. They, physically are not. The hurt of the one who is reminded everyday by the memorial ...
Jun 10, 2015 -
Re: Frankenstein
This is painful to me. This girl is hurting herself. She would rather forget. Oh my goodness. This hurts so much.
Jun 5, 2015 -
Re: Mirages
This poem. I have nothing critical to say about it. This voice is comical. Once I realized hallucinations, I laughed. It was funny, this person's denial and desire. Such a ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Affirmative Action
I'm very open to your work, and it's just so incredible. I love your voice and the reasoning your voice has. I love the reasoning. I love the logic. It's ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Its over
This is for a rap song, correct? My opinion on rap may be a bit biased, because I won't even give it a chance. So I read your work as ...
Jun 2, 2015 -
Re: White Heron {Introduction}
Wow. Thank you so much for this. I see a lot of mistakes that I didn't see before. I appreciate your trained eye, and thanks for taking the time to ...
May 31, 2015 -
Re: Chapter one
It seems deleting the many copies of the same thing needs to be exacted of this work
May 30, 2015 -
Re: The Death Of William Bristowe
Hahaha!
May 29, 2015 -
Re: The Death Of William Bristowe
You named it limbo anyway. How dare you!! It's okay. I still love you...
May 29, 2015 -
Re: Everyone Needs a True Friend
Ah, no prob. As I was writing out that part, the thought did occur to me that it might have been during a rough time. I hope things are better ...
May 29, 2015
