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  • Poetry » General, General Re: by grains

    I am reminded of a dormouse. Such a small little thing. A baby. His breath is small; his lungs two little pockets of life--that shrivel up and are empty. This ...

    Jul 24, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Fatigue and love

    This reminds me of someone I know. Wow. Sorry, It was just so weird for me to read this. It's REALLY familiar to me. Really.

    Jun 22, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Thick Heart

    Wow. Thank you soso much! I'm feeling very honored right now. I'm your first review??? Man, that's exciting. Thank you so much for your sweet feedback and encouragment

    Jun 22, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: White Heron {2}

    Okay. I love you sososo much! Your reviews are fantastic! Thank you so much! Yes! I would love for you to keep reviewing my work! Thank you so much for ...

    Jun 20, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Frankenstein

    It's okay, floatingvoice. Really :)

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: when you cant understand the word omnipresent

    I see. I believe I understand. One has died. The ghost is always there. They, physically are not. The hurt of the one who is reminded everyday by the memorial ...

    Jun 10, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Frankenstein

    This is painful to me. This girl is hurting herself. She would rather forget. Oh my goodness. This hurts so much.

    Jun 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Mirages

    This poem. I have nothing critical to say about it. This voice is comical. Once I realized hallucinations, I laughed. It was funny, this person's denial and desire. Such a ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Satire, Dramatic Re: Affirmative Action

    I'm very open to your work, and it's just so incredible. I love your voice and the reasoning your voice has. I love the reasoning. I love the logic. It's ...

    Jun 4, 2015
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: Its over

    This is for a rap song, correct? My opinion on rap may be a bit biased, because I won't even give it a chance. So I read your work as ...

    Jun 2, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: White Heron {Introduction}

    Wow. Thank you so much for this. I see a lot of mistakes that I didn't see before. I appreciate your trained eye, and thanks for taking the time to ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Chapter one

    It seems deleting the many copies of the same thing needs to be exacted of this work

    May 30, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Death Of William Bristowe

    Hahaha!

    May 29, 2015
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Death Of William Bristowe

    You named it limbo anyway. How dare you!! It's okay. I still love you...

    May 29, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Everyone Needs a True Friend

    Ah, no prob. As I was writing out that part, the thought did occur to me that it might have been during a rough time. I hope things are better ...

    May 29, 2015


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— V for Vendetta