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Chancing a review. Well, that hurt my little soul... good job! I like how this poem is a story. The story carries emotions through metaphors. It makes my heart sink ...

Chancing a review, I don't much care for politics, but I like the bitter taste your poem leaves in my mouth, it reminds me of coffee. (Though I'll review it ...

Gem chancing a review. I picked this out to review days ago. I like how this poem reads like a memory or a stream of conciousness. It addresses you addressing ...

Chancing a review. I enjoyed this poem. The premise of lies being what save most of us is odd and unspoken but absurdly true. Most of us lie to ourselves ...

Chancing a review. I loved your rhythm and rhyme scheme, the way you used 'abab' and changed rhymes with constitent rhythm fit. :> The poem has a powerful message, and ...

Chancing a review. I loved this peice. I enjoy your wording and the way you break your lines, its is on point. I overly enjoyed the last two lines on ...

Chancing a review. I loved your formatting, it stressed the beauty of the pain in your words and made things clearer than they would have been with a more plain ...

Chancing a review. Hey I hope this review finds you well. Glad I got the chance. Much love, Shadow

Chancing a review. At 1 am so I hope it makes sense. Your rhyme and meter were so beautiful they destroyed me, but only in the best way and your ...

Chancing a review. At 12 am so I hope this makes sense. I love that such an openly sad poem ends on such a nice note. And I'm an ugly ...

Chancing a review- This poem has a soft way of talking about the hard world- almost a childlike veiw. That is my favorite thing about it. It makes me smile ...

Chancing A Review I like the word sparse arrangement, you still manage to describe exactly how you/the author feel/ feels. The way the author feels is very relatable as well. ...

Chancing a review. Hello Whatchaloo. I love the listing feeling- the anxiety- I'm giving you my reasons attitude. The message of the poem is deep and strong and true. There ...

Hello this is Gem climbing out of her jewelrybox for a review. So I did get a feeling of deep nothing in my chest, like something was missing after I ...

This is Gem climbing out of her fairy garden for a review! I like this poem. I was a little disappointed by your word choice while spectacular word choice with ...