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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Kalopsia

    Chancing a review. I loved this peice. I enjoy your wording and the way you break your lines, its is on point. I overly enjoyed the last two lines on ...

    Jan 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, Culture
    Re: love like sawdust

    Chancing a review. I loved your formatting, it stressed the beauty of the pain in your words and made things clearer than they would have been with a more plain ...

    Jan 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic
    Re: Hats Off To You

    Chancing a review. Hey I hope this review finds you well. Glad I got the chance. Much love, Shadow

    Jan 23, 2021

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: My Mistake

    Chancing a review. At 1 am so I hope it makes sense. Your rhyme and meter were so beautiful they destroyed me, but only in the best way and your ...

    Jan 22, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other
    Re: Cry Pretty

    Chancing a review. At 12 am so I hope this makes sense. I love that such an openly sad poem ends on such a nice note. And I'm an ugly ...

    Jan 22, 2021

  • Poetry » General, Narrative
    Re: Who am I?

    Chancing a review- This poem has a soft way of talking about the hard world- almost a childlike veiw. That is my favorite thing about it. It makes me smile ...

    Jan 19, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: Too Small Too Big

    Chancing A Review I like the word sparse arrangement, you still manage to describe exactly how you/the author feel/ feels. The way the author feels is very relatable as well. ...

    Jan 19, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Trust that you'll fly

    Chancing a review. Hello Whatchaloo. I love the listing feeling- the anxiety- I'm giving you my reasons attitude. The message of the poem is deep and strong and true. There ...

    Jan 19, 2021

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: Nothingness

    Hello this is Gem climbing out of her jewelrybox for a review. So I did get a feeling of deep nothing in my chest, like something was missing after I ...

    Sep 4, 2020

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative
    Re: Shooting Stars-Poem

    This is Gem climbing out of her fairy garden for a review! I like this poem. I was a little disappointed by your word choice while spectacular word choice with ...

    Sep 3, 2020


  • This is Gem climbing out of her fairy garden for a review! I am awed by this poem. Your word choice as well as your grammar and flow are amazing. ...

    Sep 3, 2020

  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction
    Re: Mon Amour (Part I)

    This is Gem climbing out of her Fairy Garden to review. This review was requested by @Fishr. I am new to reviewing romance novels and the like, as I don't ...

    May 1, 2020

  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic
    Re: Silent Water

    This is Gem climbing out of her fairy garden for a review! I am really awed by this poem. Your description as well as your grammar and flow are amazing. ...

    Apr 27, 2020

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other
    Re: seeking winter

    Hello! Gem here climbing out of her fairy garden to write a short review for your poem! I saw that this and I decided to check it out. And, I ...

    Apr 26, 2020

  • Poetry » Literature, Other
    Re: Relevance

    This is Gem climbing out of her fairy garden for a review! This is an interesting poem and I am fond of it. I like the tone of the poem, ...

    Apr 26, 2020


More than anything she wanted the world to be uncomplicated, for right and wrong to be as easily divided as the black and white sections of an Oreo. But the world was not a cookie.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Tree of Wishes