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Re: Dedicated to a Ywser
Hello, Farah here to review. This writing has great imagery and a good structure too. It has the potential to be a very good spoken word poem. However, there's a ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: Telekhines
Hello, farah here to review. I really loved the the style you used in your poetry. It is pretty unique. The anonymity of these warriors who rebelled against gods made ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: Comfort Food
Hey, Farah here. I agree with the previous comment. The initial tone of the poem was a humorous one, and became darker as it progressed. I really like that approach. ...
Nov 2, 2015 -
Re: Fire Poker
Hey, farah here to review. This work doesn't need in any nitpicking. At least, there's nothing I can think of. Your poetry conveys a deep and vivid imagery. It's beautiful. ...
Jan 8, 2015 -
Re: The Photo Chapter Three (part two)
Hey, Farah here to review. I'll start off with some nitpicking. You may or may not agree with me, and that's cool. I like to go by the rule 'less ...
Jan 2, 2015 -
Re: Pine Shelter Building.
Hey, farah here to review. I'll start right off with the content instead of the nitpicking. I can relate to the style of so much because I'm a type of ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: I wish I could tell you
Hey farah here to review. I think this piece of writing could be turned into a great song if you add a little tune to it. The words seemed very ...
Nov 17, 2014 -
Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 2: (part 2)
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Nov 3, 2014
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Re: One Way Out- Chapter Four
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Nov 3, 2014
Hi there! here to give you a late night review!! Lemme just begin with positivity!! I must admit, I enjoy this story a lot. It is very captivating and really ... -
Re: Silence is Silver, Chapter 32.
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Nov 3, 2014
Hi there! here to give you a late night review!! Lemme just begin with positivity!! I must admit, I enjoy this story a lot. It is very captivating and really ... -
Re: MechWarrior Chapter 2
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Nov 3, 2014
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Re: Crazy Little Love Story (2) Enter Eden Sioux
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Nov 3, 2014
Hi there! here to give you a late night review!! Lemme just begin with positivity!! I must admit, I enjoy this story a lot. It is very captivating and really ... -
Re: One Way Out- Chapter Five
[edited by a moderator due to being one of many identical reviews posted all around, hence considered spam - enspoilered rather than deleted because there's a reply] Hi there! here ...
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: A Certain Magician - Chapter One (Part 1/3)
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Nov 3, 2014
Hi there! here to give you a late night review!! Lemme just begin with positivity!! I must admit, I enjoy this story a lot. It is very captivating and really ... -
Re: A Certain Magician - Chapter One (Part 2/3)
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Nov 3, 2014
Hi there! here to give you a late night review!! Lemme just begin with positivity!! I must admit, I enjoy this story a lot. It is very captivating and really ...