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Re: A Toy's Duty
Dear Nunyabusiness, I will review on your poem. I like it very much. It was very whimsical and creative. The rhyming was very good. The rhythm was good, though a ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: Virtue of Sleep
Why didn't anyone review this song?! I really like it. Your topic was so creative. Who would have thought of writing a song about sleep? I like your choice of ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: Lament of the Butterfly
You did a good job on the poem. I just, however, could not really follow it. I know that the poem was not meant to rhyme, but the rhythmm was ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: Hotels
This is a well-written piece. Your choice of words was very good. I am very confused about the description of hotels. I did not understand the part where you said ...
Apr 22, 2015 -
Re: Death
Great job on the poem. I encourage you to write more poems. I like the story to it. I also like the moral (if that is what you call it) ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Hazardous Candy
This a cool poem. It is very humorous. I liked the part where the cotton candy man was screaming why was the cotton candy always exploding. That is very creative. ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 2
Great job on the story. As I said before in my review of the first chapter, there are some punctuation mistakes. Also you said this: "So she sighed and slumped ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Dreamer - Chapter 1
It is a very creative story. I encourage you to write more. However, I did see some punctuation mistakes. For example, you wrote "I love you more." She replied. It ...
Apr 21, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 3
Oh how nice is this story Full of beauty, full of glory Mysterious coins is the center star Let me see if they take me far. Okay, I will be ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 2
He should really make a novel about this. Who would not? I liked the part where Fleta said "Alas". Do not think of me as odd (if you did, then ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Prologue and Chapter 1
It is not a bad beginning. It is very interesting. The prologue was mysterious, but I suppose that you have to read further to find out what it means. I ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 56
What an interesting story! This is chapter 56?! I would love to read the other chapters.There is something about this story that captivated me. Perhaps it was the descriptions? Or ...
Apr 20, 2015 -
Re: To Be a Better Person
It was a good story, not to mention very interesting. It had a lot of depth to it. It contained nice descriptions. This story tells the truth about bullying which ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: Hope
It is such a lovely poem! It is really vivid, bright, clear, colorful (I apologize for the synonyms). I read it out loud and it is so smooth. It very ...
Apr 19, 2015 -
Re: But it's Been Like This For Days
I like this poem. Kind of rhymes, but not entirely. It is kind of rough. I do not know if this was meant to rhyme because if it did not, ...
Apr 19, 2015