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Why didn't anyone review this song?! I really like it. Your topic was so creative. Who would have thought of writing a song about sleep? I like your choice of words. I also admire the way you put your words together. But I do not know how the rhythm goes. It was confusing to read it.
I do have a question for you. Are you an expert on lyrics and poems? Now, why would I ask that? I have written a poem titled "Kingdom Beyond the Mountains" and it needs some work. Please look at it and comment. Please give me some advice on poetry if you look at my poem. I would really appreciate that.
Hey! Good job on your song.
Good luck and keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very truly yours,
fantasydragon01.