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Emoticons should never, unless under threat of death, be allowed in a poem. Now I am a victim of writing something in one mad go and then smiling like I ...

In time where we have billboards for love and Japanese cars It ain't uncommon for the streetlight to call themselves stars Where the more you learn the more you can ...

Ill tell you this, come up with some original thought and please learn how to use the english language correctly. You is not u. I don't detect the craft that ...

Im writing this on a failing computer with only a few minutes left on her last battery, so excuse and brevity and/or grammatical errors. This is a beautiful poem, One ...

This is banal in the worst possible way. I can't keep saying this to every poem on this website but people need to stop talking about their old boyfriends and ...

Well, its brevity is its strength. It could be long and awful or short and sweet. Unlike maybe every other thirteen year old here your message comes on strong and ...

Pain, you can run all you want but in the end its still there the pain inside of you you wishing for it to dissapear but its still there no ...

How very melodramatic. I don't know what I was doing freshman year of high school but im sure that I wasn't letting some faux boy/girlfriend ruin my life. When I ...

Galerius gave this poem a savage and completely true critique, this website needs to stop being so kind to angst filled teenage poems about a love that not one of ...

Im not the one to spout ideological blather but Im sure you will find somebody that will cite some specific reasons why one should not support the war. But I ...

I am assuming that you are talking of writer, the lead references seem to point in that direction. Please tell me if I'm right. Your language is incendiary and honest. ...

All i wanted to say has been said above this post, but I would like to say a few words of encouragement. Of sorts. You are 15 so that excuses ...

This poem is written with a weight that is rare even in dramatic poetry. I am not sure, but if my instincts are correct this is a love poem of ...

Figures crowed my tear swollen eyes. Everyone in my life whom I've loved; all the enemies that I still despise. I wish that people would stop crying so much in ...

God no, not more moralizing. My mind grows weary under the pressure of the constant preaching of morality that i get from all sides day to day. Now it has ...