erinr05

I love how this poem is set out. (Is there any particular meaning behind the dates, or are they random?) As FloraPoems mentioned, the idea that all the seasons are ...

This piece is very emotional and I like the way it's written. My only real issue with it is paragraphs. It can be quite hard to read, and is a ...

This chapter's great as well. Honestly, you are so good at writing cliffhangers, I can't wait to find out what happens next. In the first paragraph, I think you meant ...

I loved the cliff hanger. This story's really interesting and structured well. There are a few missed commas: "Oscar, the youngest child out of the bunch screeched out" should be ...

I like this poem. It was a good idea that was written well. The 8th/9th line was a bit confusing to read. "Mouth Dry and tea glass Empty an Inconvenience ...

I like this poem. There are a few spelling mistakes, but I think most are typos. Near the start of the poem, you wrote "the head vansihed", instead of "the ...

This is both terrifying and beautiful. I love the 7th stanza - the descriptions are amazing to read. The last two stanzas are interesting, and I especially like the last ...

This is a great read! I love how you've taken a famous fairy tale and added a twist - this story's quite creative. The way you write is easy to ...

This is so sweet and beautiful. In all your poems, the imagery is fascinating. I liked the repetition of "I am a lighthouse". The last stanza is especially beautiful, in ...

This is a beautiful (but sad) poem. The imagery is incredible, I especially like the lines: "Because it won't last as long as | dried ink on yellowed, musty pages." ...

This poem as beautiful. It's thought-provoking and the replacement of "my best friend is gay" with "my best friend is dead" is heartbreaking - it shows how the "wrong" sort ...

You write very poetically and beautifully - I love your style of writing. Just as a small criticism, I think that if the starts of lines/stanzas were capitalised it would ...

I loved the essence of this poem, it's beautiful and relatable. The way the lines break up breaks the flow a little bit and makes it a bit harder to ...

I love the concept of the poem - it's unique and interesting. It reads like something written hundreds of years ago (in a good way). I like how the poem ...

I love how this is written. The writing style's great and I'm wondering what the rest of the story would be. It was a fun read. In the second paragraph, ...