Young Writers Society

I love how this poem is set out. (Is there any particular meaning behind the dates, or are they random?)
As FloraPoems mentioned, the idea that all the seasons are one person is really unique. The emotions/feelings associated with each season are also interesting.
I liked the first and last stanzas describing the cameras. I particularly like the ending:
"beyond the frame, such eons persist | as seasons change behind the lens."

My favourite lines are probably : "Shutters flash at lightning speed | though seconds are quicker to pass", "welcome life, that which springs from below | windy dances bow to praise the newborn souls" and "her feet are barren, eyes glint in a flurry | angelic winter with a year in her sights".

I really enjoyed reading this, thanks for writing

This was pretty good, I just have one question-what the heck is a trice?

Hey! I really enjoyed the imagery you captured in this poem, as the dates you placed before each stanza made the personality of each season you were capturing in this poem very clear. I love the concept of all of the seasons being one person, I think its a really different and unique to see when most characterization of the seasons involves spring, summer, winter, and fall all being separate people. I’m a little confused by the line “each trice a decision, a picture to last?” as i’m not quite sure if its a misspelling or just a misunderstanding on my part. Overall my favorite line was “the ground is frozen, dipped in the moon’”. Thanks for writing, I really enjoyed your poem!