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Joshuapaul, I see you're not too new here. ;) Well, Happy Fake Review Day! I noticed that in "wascool" you need a space between them. "My brother wascool..." And you ...

Heya Ossum, wisegirl22 here. Happy Fake Review Day! Now, I see in the first part, you said "alot". "Alot" is not a word. "You've been told alot of things..." And ...

Hey, Aurora99, there wasn't anything I could say, except for this: This is very minor, and you don't need to correct it at all. Just, for me, "apologising" is "apologizing". ...

MaskedDreams, I don't think we've met. If you have any questions, let me know, and I will answer them! Welcome to the site! I think, in the second paragraph, you ...

Hey, this is great, only minor error(s). A little ways into the song, I noticed you put periods between single words. This doesn't often appear, actually, it has never appeared ...

Hello, Pinkiegirl13, I've seen that you have written many more strange works in your time on YWS. Well, congratulations, and thanks for the follow! Okay, the first thing I noticed ...

Purple29, I've seen you before. Nice avvie. Is that you? I found an error into this short story. Many typos like this occur often, and it is I, wisegirl22, who ...

Hello, IamTraunt! I think we've met, does wisegirl22 ring a bell? I changed my avvie. :) So, in the title, you should capitalize as many words as you can. Capitalize ...

Birkhoff...this was something...else. :) You seem like the goofy type. Are you? Rhyming is very you can join me, or make a rhyming club! I used to enjoy writing, but ...

Rebecca, hello! Wisegirl22 here with a new avvie, writing a fabulous review for your script, one that took me 3 hours to read. :) In your little beginning note, was ...

NiteOwlIII, pleasant surprise. Are you into Greek Demigods? Have you read Percy Jackson? Okay, one thing, I am really, really picky of how the gods act. Zeus...doesn't act this way. ...

Oh, sorry about the leave me alone part. But you were lonely, so hello! Wisegirl22 at your service, giving praise from yours truly. I really love the repetition of "Me ...

Hi, jackspratt999, I don't think we've met. my name is wisegirl22, because I dare not reveal my real name, and this is amazing! I think we would be amazing friends ...

Hi, JonnyShaman, weclome to this site. I see you're fairly new here, if you have any questions about the place, let me know. I'll answer them, I've been here long ...

WindSailor, excellent song you have here. I believe I followed you, am I wrong or am I write? Haha. I think Verse 2 has absolutely nothing to do with how ...