Joshuapaul, I see you're not too new here. Well, Happy Fake Review Day!
I noticed that in "wascool" you need a space between them.
"My brother wascool..."
And you have absolutely no reason for a space between "eye" and "brows".
"Eye brows raised."
I basically have no idea what the concept is about, so please clear it up. Work on spacings, and good evening to you!
-wisegirl22
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