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Hey there, fallenoutofgrace! I'm wisegirl22, as you may or may not know, and I am here to help you so kindly. :) We'll begin our truthful review with the small ...

Hey, TakeThatYouFiend, nice to see a work of yours. Let's dive into this highly-frosted-overly-sweet cupcake. :D This is a very common, very unnecessary nitpick. I think you might want to ...

Hello, Anne! Welcome to Young Writers Society! Do you have any questions? If so, ask them here or on my wall. Click on my name of you want to go ...

WritingForHim99, hello and welcome to Young Writers Society! I hope you can be someone who I can talk to! As I read the first paragraph of your descriptive short story, ...

Hello, happysmilers! Nice avvie! Is this your first work? If so, congratulations! *claps and cheers* The first paragraph. I found a lot of things wrong in there, but never worry. ...

Hello, Dusk! Welcome to Young Writers Society! I see you have made friends with Cheetah. Well, she's a nice person, so good job! I hope you become featured! *slaps back* ...

Hey, Sarahfina! I see you are pretty new here, so welcome to Young Writers Society! Just post something on my wall if you have a question or something. Open to ...

Hello, Nightcrawler! I decided to drop by, as you so kindly mentioned me in a comment. I feel happy for you for completing this chapter; congratulations! The beginning really pulled ...

Poseidon, nice to see you again. I like how you styled the P.O.V.s, just as Rick Riordan did it. Smart guy. I'll just tell you two things, and then we'll ...

Hello. I am wisegirl22, and it is a pleasure to meet you. Can't wait to see your talents! :D I only found one nitpick so far. I think you need ...

Hello, Phineas! Welcome to the proud and awesome Young Writers Society! Congrats on your first work! Just ask me if you have any questions. I'm through with copying little errors ...

This is beautiful! I gasped when the picture formed, merging the three solitary topics perfectly together. Your image was great, for a pencil drawing, and you can be a real ...

Hello, Alchemist! My old friend, good to see you! I'll start off with the tiny things first. Please put a comma after "cabinet". Don't worry, punctuation is a common error. ...

Hello, Poseidon, whatssup? Hehe. Did you borrow your friend's name from Percy Jackson? I'll start out with all the little nitpicks. Punctuation!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "“Sorry James.â

Hassanfs, heya! I was feeling a little giddy today, as school was starting tomorrow. Obviously a reason. :D This is so common, my mouth, no, my hands are deft in ...