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Re: Be Strong Anyway
First and foremost great title. As someone who has severe anxiety I hear that way too much. Especially if the struggle isn't physical. It makes me want to bang my ...
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Re: Wishes
"Have a safe trip. I hope that, in the end, you come back to me. **** I hope the moments we’ve shared (though short) are etched deeply enough to convince ...
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Re: Lost Smile
"Once, I had something precious. It wasn't gold or diamonds, but it lit up my world like a thousand stars..." I love this line! I love the imagery you used ...
Jan 25, 2025 -
Re: Anderson’s story-Ghost House
Oh my goodness, I love this story. Please tell me you'll continue it? There is a ton of room for growth and explanations...why did Anderson do it? What was the ...
Aug 7, 2023 -
Re: Intrusive Thoughts
First off thank you so much for this lovely poem. Secondly, as someone who suffers from anxiety this poem is such a great illustration into what it's like. I usually ...
Aug 7, 2023 -
Re: raising dreams
Hey there, just here to leave a friendly review. I am not familiar with lyrical poems but i loved this. It flowed beautifully and it didn't need to rhyme which ...
Jul 25, 2023 -
Re: This Feeling So New
"When you look into my eyes, My heart gallops a mile. When you flash that pretty smile, My heart reaches the skies." OH. MY. GOSH. I can relate so perfectly ...
Jul 25, 2023 -
Re: To Be A Black Gay Friend
"In the realm of stereotypes, I reside, As the gay best friend, with flair and pride. But behind the glitter and the laughter's embrace, There's a struggle, a journey, I ...
Jul 25, 2023 -
Re: Gifted
Hello I'm here to leave a review :) They call me a genius, "Marveling at what I’ve done. Skipping a couple of grades Amazing most everyone. All assuming, assuming, That ...
Jul 25, 2023 -
Re: She was the Sun, He was the Moon
I absolutely love this poem. I love the way it was set up, with the stanzas on each side. I loved the romance of it. I love the simplicity of ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: jade
First off AWWWWWW, this is a sweet poem. I love the line "she says she loves me every night at the same time like clockwork. i want these moments all ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: The Spooky Squad: Chapter 2
"Grace never wanted to spend her vacation at some dusty old carnival. She despised everything about them: the large numbers of people all crowded together, the games that were impossible ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: The Spooky Squad: Chapter 1
Oh. My. Goodness where to begin! ""However, he did a lot of things that were usually considered “childish;” he only watched cartoons, he slept with stuffed animals, and his house ...
Jul 11, 2023 -
Re: A Ticking Bomb
I ultimately love this piece. I love the wording and the imagery i got from this line "So big and vast Yet small in the hand What a world it ...
Jul 10, 2023 -
Re: whydogirls?
I absolutely adore this! This illustrates perfectly that there is no set standard for men-we like all men...they don't have to be perfect. For me it was Derek Shepard from ...
Jul 10, 2023
