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Hello! I really enjoyed this little poem. It was short, sweet, and to the point. For a short poem, you did a good job with it! Congrats on writing your ...

Hello! I really love this poem. It was very whimsical (It had a lovely tone) and made me want to go sit outside at 10:00 at night just to see ...

Hello! I really liked this poem. I loved the imagery and the emotions presented in it. My interpretation: A person is staying at a hotel, or someone's house and is ...

Hello! I really liked this poem. I would like to say: usually I don't like the "artsy" stylistic formatting some poets use for certain words, such as crossing them out ...

Hello! I really liked this poem, especially the ending. Good job! One of the things I noticed was in the second line you wrote "your", when it needed to be ...

Hello! I really like this poem. I think it perfectly describes the power and addictiveness of words. I really liked the desperation of the middle sections. One thing I noticed ...

Hello! You've done a good job with this poem. Capturing emotions is difficult, much less getting others to relate to those emotions. I certainly related to this poem. I think ...

Hello! I really liked this poem, a lot. Everything I saw is just little nit-picky word-usage, because this poem is just generally weird and dark and I love it. Good ...

Hello! I really liked this poem! I liked the chalice parts, I think it's an interesting way to describe what this poem talks about. My interpretation: This is about someone(Person ...

Hello! I really liked this poem, I like the message you sent and the story you told through it. I kind of think the ending is a happier one, although ...

Hello! I really liked this poem! I like the consistent imagery and the idea of a trapeze. Here's one thing I noticed- the last line in the second stanza has ...

Hello! First, I want to say that I really enjoyed reading this poem! I really liked the feeling of this poem and I liked the atmosphere. One of the first ...

Hello! First I want to say that this was a good poem. You created a good atmosphere and emotion, and I really enjoyed reading it! One thing I noticed was ...

Hello! This is a very powerful poem, and I appreciate it's message. One of the things I noticed was that the rhyme scheme wasn't consistent. It didn't bother me, but ...

Hello! I love this poem. It has it's flaws, but I really connected with it. I don't have much to say or criticize that anyone else hasn't already said. Just ...