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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Lucid Dreamer

    Hello! Before I begin, I want to say that I really enjoyed this poem. The choppy, fragmented way you wrote it really gave me the imagery of a dream. Well ...

    Feb 1, 2018
  • Poetry » Humor, Romantic Re: true love

    Ahem. Poetry is a divine form of art. It holds meaning beyond measure, it is a way that artists can express themselves with language. It is the purest form of ...

    Jan 31, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Pretty/Broken

    Hello! Before I begin, I wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading this poem! It was very emotional, and it's clear that you poured a lot into this. I ...

    Jan 18, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Knives

    Yo it’s Ella here with a review! I’m typing this on my phone, so sorry for any typos! Firstly, I wanted to say that I liked the emotions of this ...

    Jan 15, 2018
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Sweet Boy

    Hello! First I wanted to say, what a sweet poem! This was a real joy to read. You portrayed the emotions well, and I found myself thinking of my little ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Forest

    Hello pal! I have one question before I start-du u know da wey? Ok, in all seriousness I really liked this poem, especially for the vague prompt that we used ...

    Jan 12, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Frozen Girl

    Hello! I really enjoyed reading this poem. You had great imagery all throughout it. One thing that I didn't especially like was the opening line. I just didn't think it ...

    Jan 11, 2018
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Always Remembered: Sonnet

    Hello! Before I begin, I wanted to say that I thoroughly enjoyed reading this poem. It was very sad, and I think you portrayed the emotions well. One thing I ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Child's March

    Hello! Before I begin, I would like to say that I really enjoyed the message of your piece! I thought it was very interesting, and I think you did a ...

    Jan 10, 2018
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: Remember When

    Hello! First of all, I wanted to say that this was such a lovely poem. You portrayed the emotions of the piece splendidly! Nice job! ~Nit-picky Flow Things~ "was take ...

    Jan 9, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: Unforgiving (Tumblr Prompted)

    Hola amigo! I'm here to review your stuff, so that's what I'm doing! First off, what a heckuva an ending line! Like dang. I love the ravens, and the story ...

    Jan 5, 2018
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: Purgatory

    Hello! First of all, I would like to say that I really liked this piece! It's a great concept and I had a very enjoyable time reading it. Nit picky ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: The Driver

    This was written on a mobile device, so please excuse me if there are any typos that I missed! Hello! I really enjoyed this piece. I’ve actually read it several ...

    Dec 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Mage and The Immortal Extra Chapter - Dagger

    Hello! First, I want to say that I'm very intrigued by this piece! I don't normally review novels because it's so hard to catch up, but when I saw it ...

    Dec 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: The Lion

    Hello! I really liked this poem. You painted the picture of the lion, and I could really see it. Nicely done! One thing I saw is that you have some ...

    Dec 26, 2017


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