electricbluemonkey

Hey, hey, hey CAG77, they're not that bad. I mean, she wrote them in one night and apologized for them, she admitted they need work. You're just disencouraging her to ...

Wow, I loved it. Your style was really unique and the description was just perfect. Roses scream The grass raided Blood gleams On its moist blades Hmm...I dont really get ...

Yeah, I agree. Honestly its a little too much utopian for war. But the title did catch my attention and it really touched me at times. It was a pretty ...

Wow, I like it. I agree with Mesh up there though. Overall it was really simple and thorough, and you explained things well. I liked the beginning a lot, starting ...

Whoa...suicide...I can see how hard it was to write, and I just want to say that this was a great poem. The rhyming was awesome and the emotion that you ...

Yeah, it was pretty interesting. Although I really didn't get a message out of it and couldn't really get a feel out of it. The style just didnt fit, maybe ...

Hmm, yeah, I loved the ending and the rest really kept me reading but what was really the point to it? Although I liked it and it was really alive, ...

Yeah, I would say this poem is pretty good, although it got pretty boring at some parts, like Sam said, at the first stanza. I liked the style that you ...

Still, keep the title "Firebird". It catches more attention than just "Phoenix". Now, the poem, yeah it was really cool. I loved it and could actually feel what you were ...

I agree with above, but there were some parts that I didnt like. The rhyming was just unecessary, it would be better as a non-rhyming poem, which would be mostly ...

rocked. It was very, very vivid and just...ALIVE! I could actually vizualize her, and see what was happening. It was like a dramatic really short story in poem form, it ...

Very interesting, I liked the whole style of it and could kind of understand what it was saying. I loved seeing a different style (FINALLY!), though I didnt really understand ...

Hmm...I liked it altogether, and could understand what its saying, but it didn't really flow well. The last line just stuck out of the poem and didn't fit, but you ...

Hmm...wow, that is one deep poem. I love it, its one of the best I've ever read, I can tell you that much right now. It striked me, in a ...

Hmm...good poem...very good, it had a very nice flow, very, very nice, it just rolled off my tongue. Although reading March a lot was a little intimidating. It seemed like ...