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Hello there. :3 So I really liked the idea behind it. Certainly tells us a lot about the state of mind of person who is being blamed for what he ...

Hello there. I am here for the review. :3 Okay if I sound a little tough or harsh I am sorry for that. So this was supposed to be a ...

Hello there. Just risen from the dead and off to reviewing. Pardon for my mistakes, reviewing after a long time. Off we go then. In the sky, Bright constalations twinkling ...

Hello there. I have just risen from the dead and you are my first review after a long while. I might not be at the top of my game if ...

Hello there. :3 Here for the review. What else would I be here for!! Duh!! xD I was walking all alone. My head up high and the sun's shining. My ...

Hello there. :3 I am here, finally. :D In Our life time We've got to face many changes Some make us as good as can be But some make you ...

Hello there. :3 I don't want a lover Because it’s hidden with cloud cover But if the wind's blowing me away Then I think I’ll have to play this game ...

Hello there. :3 Abroad we go In 4 direction blows The numerical four doesn’t look good in here so first what you need to do is to change it into ...

Hello there. :3 I find myself sitting in the dark my door is locked the curtains are down These lines are well written but what it lacks is imagery. These ...

Hello there. There are feathers. Pressing down. On my chest. And I. Can’t. Breathe. This has an interesting starting but the stop ruins the flow of the stanza. It makes ...

Hello there. Another hour wasted... The keys seem to hate me, The computer screen is an endless sea. The starting was not at all convincing and neither was it in ...

Hello there. :3 Nitpicks: Come with me And take my hand; Shouldn’t this be the other way round? Because when someone takes you hand then only that person would be ...

Hello there. :3 Welcome to YWS. Hope you like it here. Nitpicks: So many days, so many nights have come and gone A good start to your poem by this ...

Hello there. :3 Welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here. Nitpicks: Stop softly into the moonlight; Catch a moonbeam in your hand. Whisper sweet secrets into the night As ...

Hello there. :3 Nitpicks: Don't forget my face, or the stupid things i've said, please, retain a memory. can you do that? would you do that for me? Your poem ...