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Hello! I'm Emily and I'll be reviewing your prologue today! Congrats on taking the first steps in writing a novel, I really hope you stick with it. Overall: As an ...

Hello Hello! I'm Emily and I will be reviewing your chapter. (As an initial disclaimer, I haven't read the entirety of your novel, but I will do the best I ...

Hello Hello! My name is Emily and I'll be reviewing your work this evening. Harry Potter fanfic yayyyyy! I think you really captured the essence of the charaters for the ...

Hello Hello! My name is Emily and I'll be reviewing your work. I'm a dancer, so of course I'm partial to your story. You really captured the preteacher limbo period ...

Hello Hello! I'm Emily and I will be reviewing your work this evening. I like the concept of your short, and you are practically magical which your use of imagery. ...

Hello Hello! I'm Emily and I'll be kicking off review day by reviewing your work! First let me say that I absolutly love your writing style. Its etheral yet childlike ...

Hello! I'm Emily and I will be (sort of) reviewing your work today. First let me say that I was exactly like you when I was your age. My friends ...

Hello! My name is Emily and I will be reviewing your work today. So lets get to it, shall we? First, I want to address your grammar. Your main grammatical ...

Hello! My name is Emily and I will be reviewing your short today. Your grammar and word choice are great! Just be careful that you don't overcrowd you sentences with ...

Hello! My name is Emily and I will be reviewing your short story today. First let me say I love the premise. It is heartfelt and sweet. One thing you ...

Hello, I'm Emily and I'll be reviewing your work. Lets get right to it then! You use one of my favorite methods of forcing the reader to reflect upon themselves, ...

Hello! I loved reading your work, it made me reflect on myself a bit more than I care to think about lol. On a whole, the prose is good. It ...

Hello! Lets get right down to it shall we? First, your piece was a lot of fun to read. There are a few places where the flow of your work ...

Hello! First I'd like to say I'm totally on board with the Neville/Luna thing. I think you characterized Luna very well, and her speech and actions mirror what was depicted ...

Hello! I really enjoyed reading your work. Its immersive and descriptive. I only caution you that in short stories, writing paragraphs upon paragraphs of flowy prose can sometimes use up ...