dragonight9

Great job! The translations were close, "Sit before this massive throng and listen to my favorite song" (wanted it to rhyme) "Review story for points" Thanks of course for your ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed :) As for your little inquiry... Mostly it was just to test the student's resolve, but let's just say there is such a thing as ...

Thanks. I'm so glad you enjoyed ;) I'm also excited to reveal more about Black Squad

If this is how you truely feel I'm quite sad for you. Jesus has given me hope and helped me get through many dark times in my life. I have ...

Hi Raven, thanks so much for your reviews on this chapter and the last. Thanks to that, I ended up editing chapter 6 to have the letter in its proper ...

Thank you so much for the review! Your advice on whether I should add the image into the story was exactly what I was looking for.

Wow! What an amazing and unique reviewing style. I'll definitely look into using a few more descriptors. Describing a scene with a variety of senses really helps paint a full ...

Love the new review style! Totally you. (and the 'Bye for now' card at the end looks sick!) Thanks for all your comments. I'll definitely see about working on that ...

I'm so glad you enjoyed :) I'm so happy to see that Jarid's traits are getting across to my readers. Thanks for the review!

This is not really a review but I'm so glad you decided to share your extended family with us. I loved your descriptions of each of them, with special adorability ...

Thanks for the compliments :) Also, not sure if YWS notified you, but I replied to your comment on my wall about Nightshade.

Thanks so much! I'm so grateful for the spelling corrections you pointed out. Very helpful. I also really like your idea of showing where the characters are going. I'll have ...

I thought their names were cool. And I'm sure a younger audience would too. ;)

Thanks for the review! I find it really hard to condense all the info I want to share. I love sharing the all the little details and how things relate ...

Thanks a lot for adding to my knowledge as a writer. My target audience is a bit younger and probably wouldn't feel the dissonance you described but I am glad ...