dolwright

That was really dramatic, some case of adultery going on there if I got it right.OK, down to the review part, I think the framework of the poem is good, ...

This is beautiful. I love the rhythmic way this sounds. The imagery it depicts is wonderful. Of how fleeting our life and youth is. Yesterday is gone and we only ...

Hi, I loved your poem. I'm not too sure about the ending though. I think It had a great start and the enthusiasm of the reader should flow through to ...

Great Imagery there. A little capitalization error there but nothing to disrupt the flow of the poem. It felt like the perfect poem for a book I read, 'The pilgrimage', ...

Hi, I love your story. "I stop in that quiet street and think at the thought. When will I have a life of my own? I have it already; dammit! ...

By reading this at first glance, I'm not even sure if this is a poem or just someone narrating or describing her fantasies. There was some capitalization errors with the ...

Wow...Lots of anger and emotion displayed in this poem which could have been put to better use in a less offensive choice of language. First of all, this should have ...

There seems to be quite a number of grammar and punctuation errors in your writing. The fifth stanza needs revising: " Dear Mr. President, I would love to tell you ...

Great poem, kind of like the way I feel now, just wish we could go back to when I was very young.There are a lot of capitalization errors, I'll make ...

I love this, at first I thought I'll give it a pass, but on reading it, I'm glad I did. I especially love the last line: "I would choose the ...

Your Poem was the most Intriguing and the imagery was on point. I like the use of free verse, there was no forced rhyming. Just reading it made me want ...

Okay, the first stanza got me puzzled, "In four direction blows: blows what? "And then it's all a beautiful Art: I think it would be better written this way, " ...

Nice poem, just a few capitalization errors I'll like to point out; " beat, beat beating In our chest. "and obscene Into the norm. Also in the last stanza, " ...

Very cleverly written,The last six comments has done justice to the review, and I think this piece would be a blast if you revised it and make corrections where necessary. ...

Good poem structure, though I didn't get the last three lines, "I'll just face the fact that it was a, Bunch of Smack! You know you could absolutely do better ...