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  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Love Story

    Hey. Dogsrule5 here to review! Let's start with NItpicks Nitpicks. 1. You should capitalize the frist letter in every line if that makes since. Example... I like pie, because, It ...

    Aug 24, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Love notes written in flesh

    Hello. This was a very great poem... Review! Alright so I didn't really see any nitpicks, but it was a really, really, really, really, really, really, amazing poem. Alright so ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Where the River Flows

    Hello. Dogsrule5 here to review! So first of all this was really touching, and it touched my heart. Okay I for one think this is one of the best poems ...

    Aug 23, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Music of My Soul

    I thought this poem was very good, but I think you forgot to mention the songs title and artists. This is Dogsrule5 here to review! Alright so I really didn't ...

    Aug 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: A Poem About Love

    Hello! Dogsrule5 here to review! So first of all I thought this was a very good poem, but I did find a few nitpicks/mistakes. 1. Your stanzas are uneven. You ...

    Aug 16, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: Life As A Criminal Book 2 Prolouge

    Hellooooooooooooooooo!!! Dogsrule5 here to make a review... And just for you!!! Okay first of all I thought this was really good, but then again kind of short... But you know ...

    Aug 11, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: I Knew

    Hi. Dogsrule5 here to make a review... For you....! Okay I really, really, really, liked your awesome dramatic poem. It was really good. I totally get what this person is ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Time

    Hellooooooooooo! Dogsrule5 here to make another review, and just for you. Okay so first of all nitpicks/mistakes. 1. (This is a suggestion so, you don't have to do it if ...

    Jul 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Nuts for YWS

    Heloooooooooooo! Dogsrule5 here to review. First of all, I really didn't see a lot of mistakes, second of all I really liked this poem, it is kind of descriptive of ...

    Jul 16, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Upside down

    Helloooooooooooooooooo there!!!! XD! Dogsrule5 here to make a review!!! Okay so I thougth this was really cool the way you did this. Read It backwards was a good idea. Cool!! ...

    Jul 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Dramatic Re: Change?

    Hello there! :D Dogsrule5 here to review! :P Okay so first off let's start with nitpicks/mistakes. Okay nitpick number one. (This is mostly a suggestion. Just saying!) XD! 1. Okay ...

    Jul 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Who I Am.

    Hello! Dogsrule5 here to review! :3 Okay so first of all I thought this was really good, beautiful and poetic. I really didn't see any mistakes, either. I like how ...

    Jul 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Fourth of July

    Hey Dogsrule5 here to review, I know the last thing I did I counted as a review even though it wasn't so sorry about that, but this is your real ...

    Jul 6, 2014
  • Poetry » Historical Fiction, General Re: Fourth of July

    This was really good, I really enjoyed reading this. The only thing I found wrong with this is your stanzas are not even so I suggest you take out the ...

    Jul 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Soldiers

    Hi. Dogsrule5 here to review. This was really good and really cool. I didn't see any mistakes, even though it was on Youtube, I still didn't see any mistakes. Good ...

    Jun 29, 2014


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