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Re: Love Story
Hey. Dogsrule5 here to review! Let's start with NItpicks Nitpicks. 1. You should capitalize the frist letter in every line if that makes since. Example... I like pie, because, It ...
Aug 24, 2014 -
Re: Love notes written in flesh
Hello. This was a very great poem... Review! Alright so I didn't really see any nitpicks, but it was a really, really, really, really, really, really, amazing poem. Alright so ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: Where the River Flows
Hello. Dogsrule5 here to review! So first of all this was really touching, and it touched my heart. Okay I for one think this is one of the best poems ...
Aug 23, 2014 -
Re: The Music of My Soul
I thought this poem was very good, but I think you forgot to mention the songs title and artists. This is Dogsrule5 here to review! Alright so I really didn't ...
Aug 21, 2014 -
Re: A Poem About Love
Hello! Dogsrule5 here to review! So first of all I thought this was a very good poem, but I did find a few nitpicks/mistakes. 1. Your stanzas are uneven. You ...
Aug 16, 2014 -
Re: Life As A Criminal Book 2 Prolouge
Hellooooooooooooooooo!!! Dogsrule5 here to make a review... And just for you!!! Okay first of all I thought this was really good, but then again kind of short... But you know ...
Aug 11, 2014 -
Re: I Knew
Hi. Dogsrule5 here to make a review... For you....! Okay I really, really, really, liked your awesome dramatic poem. It was really good. I totally get what this person is ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Time
Hellooooooooooo! Dogsrule5 here to make another review, and just for you. Okay so first of all nitpicks/mistakes. 1. (This is a suggestion so, you don't have to do it if ...
Jul 17, 2014 -
Re: Nuts for YWS
Heloooooooooooo! Dogsrule5 here to review. First of all, I really didn't see a lot of mistakes, second of all I really liked this poem, it is kind of descriptive of ...
Jul 16, 2014 -
Re: Upside down
Helloooooooooooooooooo there!!!! XD! Dogsrule5 here to make a review!!! Okay so I thougth this was really cool the way you did this. Read It backwards was a good idea. Cool!! ...
Jul 14, 2014 -
Re: Change?
Hello there! :D Dogsrule5 here to review! :P Okay so first off let's start with nitpicks/mistakes. Okay nitpick number one. (This is mostly a suggestion. Just saying!) XD! 1. Okay ...
Jul 14, 2014 -
Re: Who I Am.
Hello! Dogsrule5 here to review! :3 Okay so first of all I thought this was really good, beautiful and poetic. I really didn't see any mistakes, either. I like how ...
Jul 12, 2014 -
Re: Fourth of July
Hey Dogsrule5 here to review, I know the last thing I did I counted as a review even though it wasn't so sorry about that, but this is your real ...
Jul 6, 2014 -
Re: Fourth of July
This was really good, I really enjoyed reading this. The only thing I found wrong with this is your stanzas are not even so I suggest you take out the ...
Jul 5, 2014 -
Re: Soldiers
Hi. Dogsrule5 here to review. This was really good and really cool. I didn't see any mistakes, even though it was on Youtube, I still didn't see any mistakes. Good ...
Jun 29, 2014
