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Gotcha, well as for the fragment, it's more a term that I use to describe sentences that are short and not necessarily "fragment sentences." Should have clarified that sorry.

Of course, almost all repetition is intentional, however there is a point where repetition becomes predictable and then your piece loses your magic. Although the repetition wasn't quite overwhelming,

Yikes, my bad. It was in the morning and I wasn't thinking straight -.- Silly me. Thanks for the point Veeren.

Here is a link to the short story I was referrencing earlier. It's really good and not too long. It'll help your writing style.

Thank you Cailey for the wonderful review :). I suppose I rushed a little too quickly into bringing it to a more upbeat tone. I'll certainly see what I can ...

hahahaha oh yes it certainly did. This entire poem was sparked from your wonderful poems you already wrote. I'm glad you liked it :), no I usually don't write in ...

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I cannot stop laughing I'm sorry.

Ok my dear friend Kafka, thank you for your review. Although you missed most of the purpose of my writing many of your comments are extremely helpful and I will ...

Thanks for reading Harbours! And yes this poem is really kinda suppose to scare you and the rhyming is more random because the constant rhyme line after line has an ...

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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHHHHH I wrote a massive reply and it deleted the entire damn thing! This is frustrating. One second Hayley I'll get back to you on this

awwww hudzy! What happened?! :( Well FB me about the bandages and sorry to say this one is dedicated to Julian who happens to share your love for snow even ...

Hey Laloifi! Dogs here with your review today! Ok so this is a very good poem and there are some great aspects to this, you are one of the few ...