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Hi there!
Firstly, I love it! You wrote a beautiful poem without even touching sentimentality and that is just great! The imagery is beautiful, flow is great. I feel as if you gave me an insight into a very private, closed world. There is silence, peace and softness about it. The small, well-shaped stanzas add to the poem and its feeling of a glance into a different world.
I'm really enthusiastic about this poem, but before I go further, check out "winters", because it wants an apostrophe. Take a look at "cacoon" and "flacks". I think you meant "cocoon" and "flakes" (a flack is a publicity agent!)
Maybe you could get someone to do the poem in calligraphy -- you could print copies and make a fortune! But it is also exquisite in its simplicity. Thanks for this poem, it's a real masterpiece!
AHHHHHH!!! read iht to Julzzz!!! I love it... especially since you have mentioned snow in MY perspective... dude this change is making me love you more and more and more.
Its my absolute favorite piece of work that you have EVER written... You should try to get it published.... like seriously.
Julz is special... and Lucky... 
Make sure Julz knows that 
Oh boy.... I would be at the top of the world if it was dedicated to meh...
Lol Im sorry i cant stop grinning. You just made my painful day... Im sitting in a Hotel Room with my foot and ankle in bandages!
Love Hudz
X
(sorry for the late reply... I was TRYING to get internet, and only managed to now)
awwww hudzy! What happened?!
Well FB me about the bandages and sorry to say this one is dedicated to Julian who happens to share your love for snow even though he's never even seen snow...... sure enough I'm positive he's going to hate it when he actually see's it 
!!!! And I will win tee hee. And don't get your hopes up he hates rain just as much as I do, and there is only one way that he's going to like rain which I can assure you is not going to happen 
. (Check your FB for details 
)