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Wow you are the best writer. I really loved your extensive vocabulary. And the format if the story. It really makes the reader want to read more. My favorite part in the poem is when it goes the timeless plot, that really is great description. I don't know we're you learn to rite like that.
wow will you teach me how you wrote that
i still cant believe you wrote that
And I thought I wrote depressing poetry xD
This was a piece, if gothic stuff is your thing - and I've got to say it's not my favorite, but I can see the appeal is holds for some x)
Honestly ... it scares me. The rhymes also seemed a little awkward (but rhyming is super tough for me so I get that).
Good job, and I'll be reading your other works!
Thanks for reading Harbours! And yes this poem is really kinda suppose to scare you and the rhyming is more random because the constant rhyme line after line has an up beat tone which doesn't really work in gothic