dianneece

Hi! I want to say right off the bat that this is an amazing poem. The rhythm of it is spectacular and I think it may be the driving force ...

Hi! I’ll begin by saying that I totally see what you meant that the first and last parts were written first and you filled in the middle but still need ...

Hi! To start off, I have to say this is a wonderfully emotional poem and I think you did an amazing job of conveying those emotions without being too forward ...

Hi! This is a wonderful, short poem. I loved the imagery you included in this, especially the lines “drag myself from the edge,” “frenzied battle of batted lids and lashes,” ...

Hi! To start off, I really like this poem. You have a nice handle on fantasy and narrative poetry. But there is so much going on in the first stanza ...

Hi! To start off, I have to say how much I admire your writing style. I love love love that you start off with such a blunt and straightforward image ...

Hi! I think you wrote an amazing sonnet and I'm glad to see that there are people out there trying different poem types outside of their comfort zones. I'm no ...

Hi! Let me begin by saying this is a wonderfully written poem and I love the imagery in it. For the first stanza, I had no problems and I was ...

Hi! I really like this poem for its simplicity. It works well with the idea of spinning around. One thing I want to say is that I love that you ...

Hi! To start off I have to say that I'm a bit bothered by the formatting of the poem. Initially, I thought the first two lines were going to be ...

Hi! I'll begin by saying that the emotion in this poem is well written and I adore you for that. I'm not sure if you meant to start this poem ...

Hi! Let me begin by saying that this is indeed very scary. But it's a good kind of poetic scary. I love that you start this off with the line ...

Hi! To start off, I have to say I really like the idea behind this poem. The themes you explore here (being lost, doubt, finding oneself, etc.) are incredibly interesting ...

Hi! First off I have to say this poem is pretty awesome. Your word choice and syntax is amazing and I love that you establish that from the get-go with ...

Hi! This is a very bold essay you've written, simply because the topic of same-sex marriage is so controversial right now. Which is one of the reasons I think you ...