devigonewild

Hi there! Here is your review that you asked for, I'm afraid it's going to have to be a short one since I have to be off the internet in ...

Hi there! I love Avril and Austin too :'D Anyway, onto the review! These are some really good lyrics, but as the other users have both mentioned; just watch out ...

Whoooo, zombies! XD I love dem dead but not dead things so much. Maybe more than I should. Anywaaay, onto the review. I really loved reading this piece! Is this ...

Hiya! Wild here to review your lovely poem. I don't see many problems here except sometimes I'm not sure if there should be full-stops and capital letters. For example in ...

Hi there! I'm here today to review this lovely piece of work. As @KnightTeen said, some of the words are showing up in blue links, so just try to find ...

Hi there Zen! I quite enjoyed reading this little snippet, but I am itching a bit to read more as it's so short and there is so little. So I'll ...

Haha, this story is looking to be so awesome! I love this stalker/pedo thing going on here. You've described the characters great, I can just picture this geeky, lanky teen ...

Hi there! Overall this is a nice poem, strong and relatable. There are a feel faults though that I'd like to point out. // Paragraphs. Right now this just look ...

Hello there! Today I'm going to review this (finally!) since you keep asking me to and I do owe it to you xD // First of all, this newly edited ...

Hmm, I really like this, but I'm not exactly sure what its supposed to be. I agree with the shrapnel bit, is it supposed to be a metaphor? I'll assume ...

Hi there. This is a good story and theres a nice plot going on, but the structure definitely needs fixing up. For example;; Mom: Kids go start packing up your ...

I agree with the other reviews, the structure of this is somewhat a little confusing. It really should be better off as a short story, or change the structure so ...