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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Breathing

    Hello demoncat here to review this splendid poem. I was so pulled into this poem that when you said stop breathing I'm like, oh no... Did the character just die? ...

    Aug 6, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No title

    Hello I am demoncat here to review you pretty poem. I really enjoyed reading this. It's kinda sad but in a good way. I can really feel the emotions that ...

    Aug 6, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: five, lost chances

    Hello this is demoncat here for a review of your awesome poem. I find this poem very... Intriguing? Yes indeed it is interesting. And I really enjoyed it. I love ...

    Aug 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: We're friends!

    Hello this is demoncat here to review your poem. And I must say that this poem is a treat. I simply loved it. It is so cute and a really ...

    Aug 5, 2019
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Happy Friendship

    Hello this is demoncat here to review your poem. So I really think this is adorable. And I know this is unrelated but you profile pic is that cute little ...

    Aug 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Disinfectant

    Hello demoncat here to review your poem. I really​ enjoyed this poem. It was a really refreshing read. Although I did see one spelling error when you said raditor did ...

    Aug 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Not right

    Hello I'm demoncat here for a review. It's been alittle while since I've reviewed anything so sorry I'm kind of rusty. I really enjoyed this poem. Especially​ the end. Although ...

    Aug 5, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Circle

    Hello it's demoncat revewing. And I must say this poem is great. So you graduated or something? That's what I'ma getting from this. I think I really wanna write a ...

    Jun 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Historical Fiction Re: The Throne I Chose

    Hello im demoncat here reviewing. I really love the point of these thrones. and the way you described them is fantastic. You really he Ave a way with words I ...

    Jun 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: floating

    Hello demoncat revewing. And I really like this poem but it's kind of hard to read the way it's spaced. Perhaps a sentence per line? And if you wanna break ...

    Jun 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: Faces

    Demoncat here reviewing. I really like this poem. It has a nice flow to it. It's short and sweet. And it's got just enough sassyness. I do really love this ...

    Jun 2, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: When you look at me

    Hi this is demoncat revewing. This is really cute. It makes me all kinds of happy. Like I just wanna hug my reflection right now. Would it be weird to ...

    Jun 1, 2019
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: pedestrian

    Hello this is demoncat reviewing. But like wow ... This is so deep It like makes me think. And that's good. I really like the angst in this poem. And ...

    Jun 1, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you are my place

    This is demoncat revewing. So omg this is totally the kind of place I would love to live In. And with so few words this poem is so descriptive. It's ...

    Jun 1, 2019
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Historical Fiction Re: Little Turtledove (1)

    Hey this is demoncat review. So I just got that there was a part one. And having read part two first I was rather confused. But like it's all kinda ...

    Jun 1, 2019


what are stories if not just vehicles for the pain of your own heart
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