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  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: Dead Unicorns

    Dear MrTalljoker, Hmm. This poem was a little strange. Not exactly what I was expecting. I'll go over some specifics first and then do some overall notes. Cuz my mother ...

    Aug 17, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: He Was

    Dear RavenLord, First of all, THIS IS SO FRICKING CUTE I'M GOING TO DIE. Second of all, hi! (aha) I like how you wrote the poem. It's all very neatly ...

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Open, Close

    Dear JustPerks, My name is Bailey and I'll be attempting a review today! (aha) First of all, I love the way you spaced the poem, so all the bad negatives ...

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: you can't name this

    Dear all, Hi, my name is Bailey! This is a really cool poem, tbh. I like how the lines are created, and I like the overall thought in the poem. ...

    Aug 9, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: if this is when i fall in love

    Dear 4cheyenne, Hello! My name is Bailey and I'm here to review your poem! I'm just going to start off with my critiquing comments and then tell you my happy ...

    Aug 7, 2017
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Kindness

    Dear queenofscience, Ooh! My name is Bailey, and I'm here to give you a review! (or whatever I can make of one haha) I like the method you used in ...

    Aug 6, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The fates

    Dear Axelander, First of all, is your name Alexander? Or is your name actually Axelander? It's so great omg. I love your username. Second of all, hi my name is ...

    Aug 5, 2017
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Anxiety

    Dear InfiniteRectangles, Hi, I'm Bailey! I recognize your username. I think I reviewed one of your works before, but I can't remember what it was called. Anyhow, to the review! ...

    Aug 5, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: False Mourners, Please Step Forward

    Dear Biluata, First of all, I'M GOING TO CRY. Second of all, hi. My name is Bailey. Wow. Just wow. This actually made me tear up. I had to pause ...

    Aug 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Other Re: Dear Lilly, - 01

    Hey hellachillx, Iz Bailey here my boi, Anyways XD, (and sorry if I get really formal. I am with all reviews) I really liked this. It's kind of interesting, because ...

    Aug 4, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Does Clickbait Work on Poetry?

    Dear Sheyren, First of all, OoohhoOh. Second of all, hi XD. My name is Bailey! This is a really interesting poem, something I didn't really expect to see here on ...

    Aug 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Giver

    Dear Lupa22, Hi, my name is Bailey. May I just say wow. I don't think I understood some of what is going on here, but I think I got most ...

    Aug 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: I Love Writer’s Block

    Dear IvoryRose, First of all, I like the play you set here. The whole "I Love Writer's Block" and the fact that you've told YWS you would post every week, ...

    Aug 3, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: New special!

    Dear Authorian, Wow. Hi, my name is Bailey. This is kind of interesting. It's a little hard to read, I had to look back at "Cause even though it's between ...

    Aug 3, 2017
  • Poetry » General, Dramatic Re: Abused

    Dear EmPanda15, Hi, my name is Bailey! This is a very interesting poem. It seems as though it's personal, and I think that personal poems are always the best. Your ...

    Aug 3, 2017


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