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My spelling is junk..just wasn't in my poem because it highlight the word so I'd ask my parents how to spell the words that I couldn't spell..haha :)

[The omnious shadow of gray, Takes all the hope away, Telling untold stories, Of a forthcomming day.] Those were my favorite parts of this poem, and it was all creative ...

Woah...this poem was pretty good! :) Nice job!:)

Hey great poem! :) To me, it seems like it would be a very good song.....then I figured,''Well, except for the some dramatic parts..'' But, there are dramatic parts in ...

Hey Speakerskat! Oh yeah! You commented on my poem,''Embers of Emotions" :) I loved your poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 :) I thought I was the only person who held best at such a ...

Thanks everyone!:)

Thanks you Lovelysayshi! Yeah I agree that the lines were very choppy, some wwaaaaaaaaay long and others tiny! Honestly, I don't think my poem was anything special, but others seem ...

Hey Speakerskat! holy cow!! I can't believe that people are still posting comments on my poem when it's on page 2! Anyway,thanks very much for the complements!:) And yes, that ...

Hey! So guess I'm the first one to write a comment..;) (It's an honor haha) I enjoyed your poem! :):):) Looking forward to seeing more of your work!! :):) I ...

Wooah.....that's an epic poem!!!!!!!! Great job!:) ''Hear me'' is a nice title.;) I know that everyone already wrote about how poem's are usually in stanzas, but, I mean, I noticed ...

Thanks ClaireAura!! :) When you wrote that I express myself so well and all...thanks!! :)I'll try to keep posting!! But I gotta write a ton of reviews..Xp haha well, Thanks!!!:):):)

Hi Dreamy, Wow...thanks!! I didn't realize so many people would like it! It seems as if a lot of my readers liked the poem more then I did! haha well, ...

Hey Teigist, wow your poem was super good!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!! My favorite part was the ''Not a bird Not a plane It's me, I'm escaping.'' bye!:) great job!!! :) ...

Wow........That was awesome. The part where you wrote,''The touch of madness in her frigid smile,'' and then later,''The color of madness on the walls.'' Really resulted in a feeling of..well.......ma

Oh wow you have an awesome talent, you know! Totally drew me in as I read it..:) My favorite part is where you wrote, ''Maybe then I could disappear forever ...