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Hiya Picklesole =^-^= Happy review day! (Go team Tsunami Tyrants!) lol I have to do that every review :3
Anyhoo, I also say this to everyone in my reviews, I adore poetry most of all and always take time to dissect them pretty vigilantly, so feel free to ask me to review ANYTHING at any time ^-^
Anyhoo, Nippy is here to give you reviews m-_-m
I’ve never read a sonnet before, but this was stunning! You have skill, clearly, and don’t let anyone tell you otherwise. I’d really like to read more from you. This was lovely, and your style is so lovely. I can’t say much, other than it was a really nice piece. It flowed well and wasn’t choppy or anything at all. This is just divine and I respect your talent for constructing words together.
Well done, keep writing, and do your best!
~Catnip~
Hey Picklesole,
As sonnets go this was written beautifully. It flowed well and had a lovely meaning. I'm not sure what I would really want to change here. It gets really close to perfect. You've chosen brilliant words to express the meanings. I love the last line, especially the last two words. It really finishes the sonnet off.
My only correct is that there is no 'd' in privilege, and if you remove that you have the perfect spelling. Keep on writing pretty poems! Looking forward to seeing more
Deanie x
Oh cool thanks, I always mess up those kinds of words.
Thanks! 
Such a beautiful sonnet!!Everything is perfect in there..everything well expressed..but lacks proper presentation and punctuation..but other than that its alright..
:-)
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, I'm not really sure how to punctuate a sonnet
This is fantastic! Not that I am a professional sonnet-writer or anything, but this is a very, VERY well written sonnet.
Oh, thank you!
Hey! So guess I'm the first one to write a comment..
(It's an honor haha) I enjoyed your poem! 
:):) Looking forward to seeing more of your work!! 
:) I know this is short but I don't really know what else to write except for,''Good job!!!'' 
:):) -Neonmask
Thanks!
I have other poems from a REALLY long time ago if you want to check those out, but they're not that good in my opinion...but yes I shall be posting more soonish! Hehe 