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Hey! So I really liked how this poem is mysterious, and yet you knew that something bad was going to happen. I was confused on the bend too - until ...

Hey! I'm dawn here for a review.. First of all, the last sentence was my favorite. So I'm not going to say anything about the grammar, because several people have ...

Hey! Dawny here for a review! So, this is a weird story that I would never have thought of. However, it was really good. This seems like some of my ...

Hey! Wow, I really love your word choice, and alliteration in this - it really makes the poem flow. I love this because it is so little, and yet impacting. ...

Hey! Well, first of all, I love how beautiful this poem is. I feel like you just said what every teenager goes through, well what every person goes through at ...

I loved this poem! I love the imagery that you used - it was really great to help with the details. It was so simple and a great little thing ...

Hey! I'm here for a review! I agree with some, that you almost were so rushed with trying to get everything out that you had to say, that you kind ...

Hey:) Dawny here for a review- I really love your writing. You have that adddictingness about your writing style that most writers thrive to have (not trying to be creepy ...

Dawny here for a review. Wow. That is honestly all that I can say at this point. There was a few grammatical errors that I saw, but besides that, the ...

Dawny here for a review! So, I really don't mean this in a bad way, but when I first opened this chapter, I thought it was going to drag on. ...

Hey:) Dawny here for a review So first of all, I just want to say that you have awesome characterization and imagery. I really liked the fact that you actually ...

Hey! It's Dawny for a review! First of all, I just want to say that the description is a little confusing, I seriously thought that it was about a sophomore ...

Hey! Dawny here for a review. So, I really like this story. The only thing that I found to be annoying, was the fact that all you dialogue was in ...

Hi! It's Dawny here for a review... So first of all, I don't know of it was because I was reading on my phone, or if was because the thing ...

Hey! So I guess I'm here to do a review. (Sorry, I'm kinda new at this stuff). So first off, I really like your writing style. You definitely have a ...